Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from DeepBlueJoy
despite the fact that the original chosen had Sunnydale falling into a hole, I still think this story has interesting potential... after all, it's fine to mess with the realities a bit -- you're actually trying to change things. Anyway, I do hope you will give this a couple more chapters -- ie -- finish it. Perhaps the only reason for the rewind is for Anya to save Xander from giving up and the scoobies from slowly disintegrating as one more of their number falls... i'd like to know why it wasn't Anya's time... so I'm tracking this, hoping it won't be in vain...
Review By [DeepBlueJoy
] • Date [10 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from DemonChildeKyra
Love it!!!! More please?
Review By [DemonChildeKyra
] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Can Somebody Help Her?" from Kiwikatipo
Iwould think everyone would be more suspicious of a a Faith clone. Everyone seems a little too accepting of the impossible. Exciting story.
Review By [Kiwikatipo
] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Can Somebody Help Her?" from Locathah
Er... you seem to have forgotten the bit where the entire town turned into a big crater. No ruins or bodies... just a big hole in the ground.
Oh! And even if there were bodies they'd have been little more than bones after a year outside I'd think. And why would it take a year before they got around to checking for corpses?
Review By [Locathah
] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
I only saw a few episodes of Tru Calling.... so I'm not sure how plausible it is that her friends "came back" with her unless there is a multiple regression and she does something to get them at that location later/earlier. The crossover part is interesting so far. Nice misunderstandings from the outsider. And of course, Tru has less shiny lip gloss than Faith. That's how you can tell them apart. (That and she is more likely to wear natural softer fibers and less leather and vinyl.)
Looking forward to see what you do with this story next.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [27 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Can Somebody Help Her?" from zephyrRS
OK -- this could be a nifty new idea! Will Tru now backtrack an entire year?!?!
Review By [zephyrRS
] • Date [20 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Can Somebody Help Her?" from Cilou
Really great beginning, I love it! It's really interesting and I can't wait to read more... to see if Tru will go back to just before the battle with the first or not...
Review By [Cilou
] • Date [19 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]