Review of chapter "One Long Painful Week" from Ramenth
Okay, this is great. I know it hasnt been updated in more than a year, but I'd love to see more.
Review By [Ramenth
] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Long Painful Week" from linny
This is probably the most original sg-1/btvs story I've ever read. The two worlds blend seamlessly together. It is a little graphic, but the graphicness is in context. Keep up the good work.
Review By [linny
] • Date [12 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Long Painful Week" from SarahL
really enjoyed reading this, update soon
Review By [SarahL
] • Date [21 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Donny" from Wise
Disturbing, but pretty darn good. I'd like to see more of this.
Review By [Wise
] • Date [17 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Donny" from ScorpioCharmer
it funny and really good
Review By [ScorpioCharmer
] • Date [25 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Donny" from EricThorsen
I truly hope that Donny gets to meet The Red Witch... it will be really scary for him when he finds out what real power is.
Review By [EricThorsen
] • Date [23 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's in Egyptian" from JoeHundredaire
You could stand a refersher course in English, specifically the punctuation of sentences. Your skills in that area are, quite frankly, atrocious. You also need to be able to tell the difference between "your" and "you're" for instance.
Also, back in the first chapter, some sort of formatting difference between the dream sequence and the awakening (such as italicizing the dream sequence) might be a good idea to consider.
Finally, considering that 'end of Season Six Buffy' means Tara is dead, you might want a more specific spoiler blurb.
Review By [JoeHundredaire
] • Date [30 Nov 05] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gods & Pizza" from MicheleB
Wow this is amazing. There are so few Stargate crossovers with tara in them. the 'dreams' she has been having are intense to say the least. I am a bit confused about the title "God & Pizza" makes no sense to me but, hey thats why you are the author. I hope to read more real soon.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it so far, and alas even as the author the title makes no sense to me. I'm currently searching for something more appropriate. I hope you continue to each this fic.
Review By [MicheleB
] • Date [23 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gods & Pizza" from CPTSkip
Wow! What a gut ripping start. Please write more as I really want to see what happens to poor Tara. By the gods, I hate her family, but it will be quite ironic if her bastard of a father can help her.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [22 Nov 05] • Not Rated