*poke* I found this and I was hoping for more... wonderin' if the First is messin' with Serenity's crew, likin' it was the First that was talkin' to Kaylee, Dawn, and Simon... instead of Faith and Mal in the later two's case and it bein' in her head in Kaylee's case.

Also wonderin' if your gonna bring Inara back or if your running this through the movie Serenity?

I hope you add more sometime.

5 years, still not finished. Why do you start if you're never going to finish. Another one of the thousands of unfinished stories on this pitiful website. I doubt you even read reviews anyway. I never read it, I Never read unfinished stories, but I think I've read all the completed ones except for Harry Potter xovers, just too racist for me.

I'd give you a 10 if only I thought this story would ever be finished.

I laughed. I cried. I laughed till I fell out of my chair and moaned because that hurt.

Very interesting story so far. The last few chapters seem like some manipulations of The First, so I'm eager to see where you take this!

So... it's been over three years. Are you done with this?

Three years without updates!? I'm disappointed and saddened! Please, come back to some of your older stories and tie them up for us.

One more vote and wish for updates from me! Wow, never seen anything quite like it and wish there was more. Good job! :)

AI YA!!!

*grins*

You absolutely cannot leave this here. What a cliffhanger! Is it the First? The First can inhabit dead people, and Mal has died in the series that one time with Niska, that qinwa cao du liu mang. Faith is a vampire and also technically dead. Man, this story is giving me chills. Dawn will fix everything! Please post it! You write so well, and I'm loving every word!

EVIL author, you leave at that, and that's evil.... PLEaSE update soon, I wanna see Spike/River/Mal beat the freaky shadow thing to death, repeatedly, painfully, possabley inventing new forms of torture.

I mean I thoguth it was weird Faith going all P.M.S.ing female dog, but Mal woudl never kick the doctor out, as he's stated and he DEFFENETLY woudlnt' rape him....

So PLEASE psot more, I want to see this evil thing begging for death, also I'm nto sure does it use ones fears, or twist ones fantasies? I mean if Dawn really did want to get out of Buffy's shadow, Simon wanted to go back to his previous lfie, and you kinda implied some possible Simon/Mal stuff earlier.

I think it's kinda interesting how you didnt' have Spike do anything to Kaylee, or vice versa. Or Walsh and or Zoe.

I really do feel bad for Simon thought, I hope he get's even. Well you know what I mean.

awesome story.
more please.

Lovely story with some really great, and quotable, lines...but unfinished!!!

Please do more.

LOL, Kaylee is so cute! That's the exact same thing I would do; ask to have a better look at his fangs. onward to the next installment! *marches forward*

More Please...

You leave us after I just figured out who's messing with everyone's minds!?!?!? Come back to this story! Please! I beg of you!!

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mother fucking first, fucking son of a bitch sadistic fucking bastard!!!
Is it a bad thing you write his brand of crazy evil so well...? All we need is a dead Nisca or Mal's platoon to torment him and I think everyone will get it.
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I started reading this series Sunday and just finished it (Tuesday)...I am thrilled by it,and saddened that it's over. I know you stopped on this over a year ago, but would LOVE to know what happens next.

I am an English teacher and a picky crossover fic reader, and this is the only decent Buffy/Firefly I've found (as of yet).

Your characters are real...the way you tie things in from both series is valid...and some of your writing is so beautiful that it's been added to my quote wall at home.

let me know if you ever go on with this.