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Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from BrownFinderth
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Wonderful story!! Yet, I doubt that the end is truly the end as the questions of Glory and Faith seem to remain.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from (Past Donor)CrashxBurn
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Well that was a cliffhanger... You had great ideas for the plot, but it could have been executed better. It was a bit rushed and there wasn't much detail. I would recommend getting a few really good betas to clean the story up, mainly focusing on spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. You might go back and try to add details to make it more exciting. These are just suggestions for improvement, and I hope you will consider them. Good luck with your future writing endeavors.
Review By [(Past Donor)CrashxBurn] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Past Donor)CrashxBurn
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Ok... you have a lot of mistakes you need to correct. I'm really trying to follow this because I'm curious to see where it ends up, but the mistakes are EXTREMELY distracting. It's Peter Pettigrew, not Peter Pentgrew. Gryffindor with two f's, not one. Voldemort, not Voldermort. Daniel Osborne, not Daniel Osberon. Avada Kedavra, not Avada Kedar. And you mentioned the "murder of the Potter's", but you meant to say "the murderer of the Potters". There are dozens of other little mistakes, but those are the most obvious and the most distracting. I hope you will fix them when you get the chance. You might hold more readers if you clean the chapters up a bit. Good luck with the rest!
Review By [(Past Donor)CrashxBurn] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from JarodsSlayer
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I love it. Can you make a sequel? And if you have, what's the title?
Review By [JarodsSlayer] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
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I like the story. I hope you come out with a sequel of some sort to tie up loose ends, and to just give me more to read:) Like what happened to Glory and I'd like to see some more now that you brought Faith to Hogwarts.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [17 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Titled Yet" from chajalive
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Sorry, but I cannot get past the first chapter. THe interaction between Buffy and Snape was just too.... I cannot put it into words. I just hope for your reader's sake that your writing got better towards the end. I guess that is what writing is all about, learning. It would be a good idea if you got a beta to read through your stuff and tell you when you are missing out things, misspelling or simply need to rework some dialogue.
Chaja
Review By [chajalive] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from AriaDragoncrest
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Great story!
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [23 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from (Past Donor)shadowslayers
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wow, i liked this story a lot. and the way you let willow and Xander see how they tear Buffy apart and expect her to face the dander alone is great. wish we could of seen a heart to heart with wood. and maybe seen it go farther/ deeper.
Review By [(Past Donor)shadowslayers] • Date [11 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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I really liked this story. Though I would have liked a little more resolution with the watchers council. Also I think Buffy should have spoken to Wood about Angel. I think a sequel would be awesome...maybe one where Angel comes back from Hell? and the watchers council tries to control/kill Buffy maybe to keep her from becoming a complete slayer. I also curious about if they ever found out why Glory was worried about the griffin? I loved how Snape changed for the better when he learned about Buffy. I am also really glad that she told off Xander but even more glad the finally made up again. That was a very good story thank you.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [20 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from immortalsilence
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wicked but you can't leave it on a cliffhanger like that,please post more chapters .
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [15 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Slayer's Keeper" from Anonymous Reviewer
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i hope you will update this story soon. i can't wait to find out what happens next.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [21 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Slayer's Keeper" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Can't get past the first part of chapter one. It just seems like a poor excuse to bring Buffy into the the Harry Potter world. Sorry, but there's no real attempt to give any explanation at all. I mean honestly she suddenly has powers and she's put into third year? Why most likely to be in the same year as whatever book you just finished, a crossover should meld the two world's not force one into the other.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Slayer's Keeper" from Anonymous Reviewer
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You might want to go over this again; I noticed a lot of spelling mistakes, particularly in regards to proper names of people and places from the Potterverse.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Slayer's Keeper" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Nice story, but I think it's missing a chapter (Ch 11).
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Slayer's Keeper" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I'm sorry I have to say this, but your story was good up until you showed how little you truly respect a good character. By taking a good charactor and using him as a way to piss buffy off, you show your impatience to get on with the storyline, your lack of insight into characters, your inability to write Xander in charactor (no big concern of yours so far as I can tell anyways) and/or your true ignorence when it comes to obvious human psychology. Good luck on any future writing ventures but I doubt that I will be reading them.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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