Just finished reading what you have written here. Really enjoyed it, right up to your cliff hanger. Then I saw the date of your last update. Arrgh. I suppose six years later it is unlikely you will update but just know there is a least one person who hopes you do.

Okay this just blow my mind. This story is great some point that might need improvement but that not really matter. What can i say, i love this story. I sure would love to read more of it. Shame it unfinished but oh well.

I really liked reading the story. But it ends just when the story was picking up momentum.
Is this story abandoned or is Real Life being a bitch.

I hope to see a new chapter soon.

I have really enjoyed this story and have re-read it twice.
I truly hope that you will be able to update and I hope that you have not left this fanfic to die.
dave

So it begins, the last chapter's title. I hope its a foretelling of updates to follow. With the newest title of Halo due out next month lets celebrate with more of this wonderfull story. PLEASE update.

I have to say that this is a really great story. Is there any chance of you finishing it?

Evil 3-year cliffhanger. Everything was just starting to come to a head!

I love the thing with the Jolly Roger flags. The mental picture was hilarious.

I feel horrible for Cordelia and Harmony. Particularly Cordelia - at least Harmony died relatively quickly.

I do hope you continue this. Despite a somewhat shaky beginning, in the more recent chapters this fic seemed as if it was finally starting to come into its own. The only thing about this fic that I didn't love was your portrayal of Buffy. Sure, she could be a bit annoying at times during the series, but I think you're being a bit harsh on her.

Overall, I think this story deserves a resounding 9/10. I've loved it so far.

I really hope you continue this...

wants to read more...

I liked most of the story. You had some really good ideas in this fic. I did not enjoy Cordelia's treatment at all. The more I read the in this fic the more I got outraged they didn't dust Angel even after he got his soul back. Buffy really was fucked up badly. Perhaps you should not list it as a Faith/Xander fic since there really wasn't any of that in there. I enjoyed it a lot.

Though I am a little late in reading your story I wanted to let you know what a fabulous story it is. Though I am not well versed in Halo you have done a wonderful job in your descriptions, and weaving the plot and details in to the storyline so that I don't feel lost in the story.

If the muses so inspire I would be delighted to read more about these fascinating characters!!

cool sroty :) saw that its a really old one but hopeflly some day you will pick it up again :)

Another year and still not update. Even after repeated rereads this still a good story. Please update soon.

The story is amazing. Even though it hasn't been updated for nearly two years all I can say is keep up the great work (whatever it may be).

interesting story. too bad about Harmony and I don't like that you tortured Cordelia into insanity like was done to Drusilla. though, it does give ample motivation for Xander to wipe out Angel. having Buffy not know that angel turned bad and making her more power hungry is logical, but even in the show he told her that he was bad. she would have figured out that cordelia and harmony were missing, even if they didn't get along. but, with Angel keeping her occupied and deceived, along with her "I am the slayer so I get to be a spoiled brat" attitude, I can see how she missed the two disappearances/detahs. overall, great story and you combined the buffyverse and the stargate universe very smoothly.