Awww...nice turn of events here for Faith & Xander. I wasn't expecting Mac to be the Potential Slayer. I assumed it was Veronica, but I like that you made it Mac. -grins-
Review By [PhoenixRae] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Awww! *bg* You're as good with the sweet and touching as well as the funny.
Chapter 2? The end of it, lmao! Poor Willow. Can't Xander understand that she's trying to help?
I just want to say thank you for writing the scoobies doing work yet having fun. I mean I love the serious stuff but you don't see the three of them just being friends anymore, with Giles rubbing his glasses, Dawn being silly, and Andrew whining. Now Faith's in it too, actually in the fun and that's real cool. All I see is the serious stuff or them abusing Xander and not appreciating him or both. Been sometime since I've read the scoobies kicking ass yet having fun. And get this Riley and Sam are good guys! And you even had Graham! Yay. Just have the sexy chocolate stud that is Forrest in the next story and you'll have had made my day *bwg*
So what's in Maryland? And just a suggestion. Two actually :-D ... San Francisco. I do believe that will would appreciate a slayer that was a fellow Wicca ... or Three. And Roswell. I can think of a certain shy bookie or a sassy blonde who'd kick ass with the staking. Just a suggestion!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Mac is a good pick for a slayer.wish she had a bigger role in season 2 VM shes a more interesting person than alot of the new people on the show.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [22 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
One I like the chapter and two, I like the revenge. And I shouldn't forget how Xander handled the situation with paying for the damages, but I think a thousand dollar might be a little too much. Or did he drove the whole bike to scraps.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [21 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Well you know How I feel about this series, and this one is no exception! I think the best part may have been the sounds of the rainforest CD...I fell off my chair from laughing. Could you please, please write more soon?
Review By [CallmemasterKent] • Date [21 Dec 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]