Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Riniko
Entertaining little story, I do hope you continue it at some point. I don't know about Buffy, but Dawn becoming a kitsune is not so bad. Kitsune's are natural shape changers so Dawn would have little problems hiding her changes. After see Willow as Belldandy, I wished you had followed a theme and had Buffy and Dawn as the other two sisters: Urd and Skuld. I could even see Xander as Keiichi. Still and interesting story, thanks again for the fun read.
Review By [Riniko
] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vld
That was pretty cool! I was wondering, though, how many innocents did they kill? Because while i don't know them (haven't seen the show), i doubt a kitsune-youkai and an ookami-yokai would take lighty to being attacked by dwarved monsters... and since they didn't know about them really being kids...
Besides, no mentions of the guy, probably an innocent, who was killed by Hao/Xander?
One last question, is Kiyoko the elder sister?
Because Buffy adressed Dawn as O-nee-chan, which means "big sister". If she meant "sister" as adressing her younger sister, she would need to say "imouto-chan".
Review By [Vld
] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NekoHibiki
Review By [NekoHibiki
] • Date [4 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from UniilaDellaLuna
dude you should do more!
Review By [UniilaDellaLuna
] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ishi
The only problem with this was your use of 'onee-chan'. 'Onee-chan' means 'big sister'. As Buffy was speaking to her LITTLE sister, you should have used 'imooto-chan'. However, very well thought out. I liked it.
Review By [Ishi
] • Date [22 Apr 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KnightWulf
i like the different versions of halloween and would love to read a sequeal to this story please. Midnight
Review By [KnightWulf
] • Date [12 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from biggstu
liked this thanks
Review By [biggstu
] • Date [20 Feb 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Lol! I have enjoyed each of your variations on the Helloween episode. I would like to see a sequel to this one as I think having Dawn help her sister is just cool. And I would love to see how they hide their new ears and tails. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [26 Dec 05] • Not Rated