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He Who Dwells in Darkness

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MadHobbit
Review:
good start, a lot of stories make Xander too powerful too fast and too all knowing


wish you would do more of this

and glad that this story make harmony an nice person,with just some of her own problems.
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [21 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IcemanII
Review:
I just found this story. Its a lot of fun, but you haven't updated in a long time. Any chance you will continue the story. It looked really promising and fun.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [18 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Obsidian
Review:
AWESOME story. Thanks.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Markelo
Review:
This one rocks and Xander is great!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [14 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
More as soon as you can please! Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [29 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
story rocks, i just wish there was more
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tjin
Review:
hmmmm..... interesting, will this ever be continued?
Review By [Tjin] • Date [2 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VeltaIO
Review:
Definitely enjoyed this and hope to see more but you really need to pay more attention to spelling and grammar. The many errors make reading this slow going at times. How about finding yourself a Beta?
But don't give up - you have interesting ideas and I want to see how they develop.
Review By [VeltaIO] • Date [12 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ladeia
Review:
Good beginning.... Interesting.. Harmony & Xander.... *shrugs* That's different.

Hope you plan on more. Would love to see where you take this.
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [26 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [26 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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