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Review of chapter "So, Little Vampire . . ." from GundumM
Review:
most were only okay, but i really enjoyed the one with Battlestar
Review By [GundumM] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So, Little Vampire . . ." from Infinix
Review:
Great group of FFA's. The first especially would be cool to have a few more ficlets as sequals just to see how she changed his life..
Comments from author:
There will be more of most of these universes. I'm just slow getting there.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So, Little Vampire . . ." from JayCee
Review:
OH I LOVE this short story...man I would read more if there was but otherwise I am totally loving this. Great story. JC
Review By [JayCee] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So, Little Vampire . . ." from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
An interesting sequence, particularly the last one :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [6 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Consort" from JennaSummers
Review:
OMG, please please please continue with the Dune section. It's one of my top 5 fav books. Please Continue...
Comments from author:
That's one of the ones i really do not have any plans for the future of, sorry. Glad you liked it though.

Actually, I don't mind others using these as starters for their own fics. Just give me credit for the idea and any text you copy directly and let me know so that I can read it.
Review By [JennaSummers] • Date [6 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choosing" from Masaki
Review:
heh interesting though very short.

Would be alot better if you took one or two idea and expanded on them.
Comments from author:
I like them this short. I do intend to write more in most of these universes though.
Review By [Masaki] • Date [5 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Consort" from alexceasar
Review:
I was so happy someone responded to this FFA. I wanted to do one myself but just haven't been able to work it out the way I want it. I would definately like to see you continue this is if you chose too. Very nice job.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [10 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Consort" from Laith
Review:
very nice.

aside from the fact Leto is a bit non-human by the time he takes the throne.

I would be interested in seeing this expanded.
Comments from author:
thank you. I was looking more at a relationship piece rather than deal with Leto's non-human aspect.
Review By [Laith] • Date [9 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blue" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like it. But I don't think Illyria has that kind of humour, but it might have developed into it in a few millennia.
Comments from author:
I kinda pictured her new personality as Fred's personality (bubbly and long winded at times) merged with the total confidence of being Illyria the God-King. Not to mention what Illyria/Fred have been up to over the millenium (more on that later). I do intend to write at least another ficlet in this universe, and i assure you while Fred and Illyria are the same person, they do NOT have the same personality.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [12 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blue" from thesithspawn
Review:
7 cause you didn't add their reactions to Illyria's revelation but 10 for the rest of the chapter:) So how about adding their reaction sometime soon? Please?
Comments from author:
I assure you, this is not the last ficlet in this universe. The reaction (and not to mention Illyria's reaction to their reaction) will be complex and different for different members of the crew. I also have some plans for what exactly Illyria/Fred have been doing since we last saw her (them?) on Angel, which will add even more complexity to the reaction.
Review By [thesithspawn] • Date [12 Jan 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Friend" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
The Cordy/Harry story was so cute. I would love to see a fleshed out story with Harry growing up with his imaginary friend...

Makes me think of Heart and Souls (a Robert Downey, Jr. movie)
Comments from author:
I intend to write more ficlets in that universe, if not a full long fic.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [3 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Girlfriends" from ripple
Review:
Well, my dog keeps on scratching and mum won't let her near any carpet now... ;)

I noticed that there's no dialogue, it's in the third person and you don't write about any specific incidents. It's all just saying what happened. None of that is wrong, but all together, it can make the story a little...I don't know, dry or something. I haven't seen much twin stuff before except when it's twincest, (not really my thing) and I liked it, but that might be what's bugging you.
Comments from author:
You may be right - thanks for the input.
Review By [ripple] • Date [3 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Girlfriends" from purplealicorn
Review:
I like this scenario (I also *heart* Jeconais's fics). I think this scenario works because (a) the grls initate it and (b) Xander is dating Padma and Pavati, not "the Patel twins" (if that makes sense). Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Not sure i got the point across. The idea was it started as Xander dating Padma and Parvati individually (at the same time with full discosure of it). However, it was then to have turned into a true 3 way relationship, both the dating aspect and the . . . bedroom . . . aspect. The fic was set up for HOW a M/Padma/Parvati relationship might come about out of a M/Padma and M/Parvati relationship.
Review By [purplealicorn] • Date [3 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Endangered" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Could the Goblin King die that easy? And wouldn't Illyria have sensed him being different? Maybe she even knows him personal. But on the other hand the Goblin King might not be that old.
Comments from author:
I added an author's note about this. Both this and the first one were writen at 2am (as is this comment for that matter). Simply put, i was thinking Jareth a Fey, like Oberon, and can be killed by iron.

Illyria's crossobow bolt would be steel (mostly iron) with a wooden tip (for the vamps).

As for Jareth's age, i think he was born well after Illyria's death. (She was technicaly dead, right?)
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [30 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Friend" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Cool.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [30 Dec 05] • Not Rated
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