Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [1 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Been There Did Him" from moonstarsfu
Review:
Really liked this one. Very funny.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Been There Did Him" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
LOL! Ooo, that was funny. And Faith would be able to rate Barney! She's had enough experience.
Hey, do you watch Numb3rs? Special Agent Don Epps used to work Fugitive Recovery, how would he react on seeing Faith wandering about?
Anyway, keep writing!
(^_^)/ BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Been There Did Him" from morgyair
Review:
OK I've read them all and now I'm up to date...over all I enjoyed ch. 14 and 28 the best...Lionel Luthor may be sleazy but he has style and well if a wish can get you anything you ask for in the Buffy verse then prayer should have equal weight in the Battlestar verse....thanks!
Review By [morgyair] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Protecting the President" from kaela
Review:
This is great although I bet there was a fair bit of convincing to get Faith to be a secretary. It would be neat to read that scene. Anyways good work.
Comments from author:
Yeah, but I only had 20 minutes and I see Faith as hiding in the background ready to strike.
Review By [kaela] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Cop Walks up to a Bar" from Chosenfire
Review:
This one is brilliant, I love the idea of Kate being Ellen's sister and the last line tied the entire story together nicely.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I love playing around with the family angle.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Good one. There were some punctuation problems, but all in all, very nice. One problem in particular:
”You’re funny, Dean, forgot to mention that.”
The way you have this line punctuated, she is talking TO Dean, not about Dean. It was rather confusing, since this obviously is NOT Dean. You need to change it to read like this:
"You're funny. Dean forgot to mention that."
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [1 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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