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Review of chapter "Good Friends?" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the new chapters, I hope to read more soon.

-Do you take suggestions?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn’t Technically Cheat" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
LOL! Dawn and the Doctor loose in the universe. If you feel like writing more about Dawn and the Doctor I will read it.
Comments from author:
Thanks, but this one came at a whim. Maybe in the future...
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [9 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Classified?" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work but I though these were all about Faith.
Comments from author:
They were originally because she's my favorite character, but I'm on this wierd Dawn kick right now. Thanks for the review, have any requests?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Come Find Me" from Jaylynn
Review:
Yay!!! Love the saving of Tara.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [10 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Texting?" from FaithWinchester
Review:
Love this last one, it looks like a great opening for a full on Dawn/Dean fic!
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hot For Teacher" from Sandi
Review:
All right! Fantastic idea.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [30 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret? Base" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Awesome meeting of Faith and Todd!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [1 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Been There Did Him" from moonstarsfu
Review:
Really liked this one. Very funny.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Been There Did Him" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
LOL! Ooo, that was funny. And Faith would be able to rate Barney! She's had enough experience.

Hey, do you watch Numb3rs? Special Agent Don Epps used to work Fugitive Recovery, how would he react on seeing Faith wandering about?

Anyway, keep writing!

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Been There Did Him" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
OK I've read them all and now I'm up to date...over all I enjoyed ch. 14 and 28 the best...Lionel Luthor may be sleazy but he has style and well if a wish can get you anything you ask for in the Buffy verse then prayer should have equal weight in the Battlestar verse....thanks!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Protecting the President" from (Recent Donor)kaela
Review:
This is great although I bet there was a fair bit of convincing to get Faith to be a secretary. It would be neat to read that scene. Anyways good work.
Comments from author:
Yeah, but I only had 20 minutes and I see Faith as hiding in the background ready to strike.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kaela] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Cop Walks up to a Bar" from Chosenfire
Review:
This one is brilliant, I love the idea of Kate being Ellen's sister and the last line tied the entire story together nicely.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I love playing around with the family angle.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hospital Bad" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
yay for updates!
Comments from author:
I actually had written this one months ago, but I just found the notebook it was written in. So I'm very glad you liked it.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family First" from Cutiepie
Review:
Good one. There were some punctuation problems, but all in all, very nice. One problem in particular:

”You’re funny, Dean, forgot to mention that.”

The way you have this line punctuated, she is talking TO Dean, not about Dean. It was rather confusing, since this obviously is NOT Dean. You need to change it to read like this:

"You're funny. Dean forgot to mention that."
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [1 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wha-huh?" from (Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
good last line.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [23 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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