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Yukimura Keiko, Reikai Tantei… Vampire Slayer.

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marikalay
Review:
Interesting. I look forward to seeing what you do with this one.
Review By [Marikalay] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ROGMethos
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I'm reviewing again in hopes that you continue the story. I hate cliffhangers, I wanna know what happens next in your mind! PLEEEEEESE!!! I'll make you a cake, -hows chocolate- I'm not above bribery!! So anyway I hope to be able to read more.
Comments from author:
Well, right now I'm lacking a lot of inspiration on pretty much all my stories, so all I can say right now is, the story is on hiatus. Thanks for the review, though, it is really appreciated. I'll try getting back on it whenever possible... maybe in a few weeks? No promises, though.
Review By [ROGMethos] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ROGMethos
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What I've read so far was good. I really hope you decide to pick the story up again and continue, I'd like to know what happens next! You can't keep us in suspense like this.
Review By [ROGMethos] • Date [20 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AnthonyR
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somewhat good story. i dont know about bakayaro, but i know that baka basically translates in to idiot or moron. why do you mix japanese in with english? do you have any idea how annoying that is? either write it in english or japanese, not a mix of both.
Comments from author:
Considering that this is a Yu Yu akusho crossover, I'd have thought that it was obvious why I used japanese. I find it funny, too, that you would review me with this, considering I only wrote one chapter of this story, while several authors in this site wrote lots of other stories where they basically do the same thing as I did, in numerous languages. Some even use French in their stories... nd do it pretty badly, might I add, which you don't see me taking offense over.
This is of no consequence, though. I only use japanese being I can't stand anime in english, or french for that matter. By "anime" I mean japanese animation. Do you know how... unnerving it is to hear Goku tell someone that he is "an idiot" in english or french when he said "you asshole" in japanese?
Well, the real reason I write like that is that I like it this way.
Review By [AnthonyR] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mackenziex
Review:
If I give you a cookie can I have some more Keiko is a Slayer? And can I just suggest either Dawn/Hiei or Dawn/Kurama with *lots* of Hiei teasing?
Comments from author:
Lol! Dawn/Hiei has been considered. Not sure where this is going to go though, I have considered three pairings for Dawn (well, one pairing and one threesome) but I have yet to make my mind. Only things I can promise are Yûsuke/Keiko and Kuwa/Yukina. As for Hiei... well, either it will be Hiei/Dawn, Hiei/Botan or Hiei/Hinageshi. And the Hiei teasing is a given no matter what pairing he ends in. The biggest problem will be getting to write more soon. I'm not giving this one up yet, but I'm afraid I can't promise anything.
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [27 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
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I don't know the crossover verse at all, but I still found this to be an interesting start. I particularly like the Keiko doesn't realize its a spell to awaken all slayers and instead thinks that THE chosen one must be dead. That will be an interesting conversation.
Comments from author:
Lol! Well, I hadn't planned on writing more of it, but now I might just do so. Anyway, yeah, this will be some interesting conversation, especially since Koenma and their other sources of information know about the Watchers Council (Travers-style).
Thanks for the review, that was deeply appreciated.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KakyuuChiba
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I liked this story, it has great promise.. *giggles* Your Japanese isint that bad.. I like the way you have it going... *cough*Yoko-Kurama/Willow..*cough* lol..Sorry im a Yoko/Willow shipper at heart... But I think it would be cool to see Dawn with hiei... lol.. Short and spikey meets short and spunky! ^_^..

Ja ne.
Comments from author:
Why, thank you! My first reviewer! I'm so proud!! Actually, my japanese IS that bad. Most of what I remember of it are insults, and I can handle a couple things in either familiar, polite or a downright insulting tone, hell, I could probably manage some extra stuffy kind of phrasings, but apart from that? Except for some techniques, insults, swears and some exclamations, you won't see much of it. Hell, if I tried I would probably come up with some nonsense.
Well, I'm really sorry but I'll have to disappoint you in here: the only guy I ever can see Willow with is Oz... or snape if I tried a HP cross. The only person i would see Kurama with would be Buffy (he would calm her most of the time, and there's more than one chance that the things that would make him tick would make her go berserk. (The perfect pairing, isn't it?)
Anyway, so far it's mostly Dawn-centric for BTVS. There's gonna be a former Potential as well (don't know if she will be one of the show's survivors or one I will create just for this). So far, my only planned pairings are Yusuke/Keiko, and Kuwabara/Yukina (shame, I somehow think that's a waste, such a nice lady with him, not matter how nice he is, he really looks ugly :D).
As for Dawn, I did consider pairing her with Hiei, but still haven't come up witha decision. Anyway, no matter what happens, I can assure you I'll try to make it interesting.
Review By [KakyuuChiba] • Date [31 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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