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Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I still love this story! Thank you for writing it!
Comments from author:
Thank you, and you're very welcome.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [2 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
I just love this! It was great!
Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from jaeanna
Review:
love the story you are a very good author keep up the good work but do you know that your pictures are not coming up
Comments from author:
Thank you, your words mean so much to much to me.

I'll look into that thanks
Review By [jaeanna] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from cbq
Review:
Excellent story. I really enjoyed it. Now I've got pictures in my head of Buffy going through the gate to jaffa planets and the jaffa hiding their secret Kali shrines so as not to annoy her. Oh and her going toe to toe with the Ori, who are rather miffed to find they can't convert anyone because they worship the great Kali.
Comments from author:
Thank, love your thoughts, mmm, may have to consider a sequel.
Review By [cbq] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from BrownFinderth
Review:
A nice concept! So, everyone's normal? Even Buffy? I'm not sure what to think. However, my thanks go to the author for writing this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Yes, as normal as a former "Slayer"/demi-god can be. *smile*
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from maxthehobbit
Review:
This was very different for a Buffy story, kinda out of the box and sideways. I liked the way it validated Jack's feelings about the tok'ra. Buffy's power was a little over the top, but it would take something like that to defeat all the evil on Earth and every Galaxy. It seems Dawn dies in a lot of fanfic stories, but rarely is there any mention about what happens to her when she dies ... heaven/hell/ returning to her energy form. Buffy's interaction with SG-1 was exceptionally written with Jack being suspicious, Daniel curious and Teal'c accepting her pretty much immediately.
Great story, I'll be checking out other stories you've written.
Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I wanted to see how far I could stretch her until she found herself again. I love Jack's snark, and Teal'c's straight to the point manner.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from bradsan
Review:
awesome story. I only missed Andrew at the end. I thought he deserved to be a the after all he smashed and defended Buffy.

are you considering a short sequel where Daniel and Buffy have a barbeque and explore other planets.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I didn't add Andrew for the conclusion because it was more of Buffy seeing and saying her final goodbyes to the core Scoobies, Faith, Angel and Spike and letting them know that their lives were their own, and so was hers.

I haven't thought about it, but may come back in the future.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
A bit of a SuperBuffy! but I still liked it a lot.

Blue
Comments from author:
I'm glad. Yes, I know it was rather OP, but it was done with a purpose, and for a limited time only. Just wanted to play with the Death is her gift premise.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from serenityselena
Review:
very original plot ....
full of suspense too ....
loved reading it ^__^
Comments from author:
Thank you. Sorry for taking so long to respond. RL gets in the way at times. Glad you enjoyed the story, it's still one of my favs.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from AzrielSunHawk
Review:
oh i really like this. thanks!!
Comments from author:
Thank you, it's still one of my favorite stories as well.
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from Blackett
Review:
Loved your story. Nice whey of dealing with everything.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from YourDoomed
Review:
Brilliant....10 shiny gold stars
Comments from author:
Ooh, claps hands happily. I love stars, right up there next to hearts. Glad you liked the story.
Review By [YourDoomed] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from getjrjt
Review:
i would say wow, but i don't feel wow encompasses how great this story was, you drew me in from the first chapter, i was angry when i had to stop for my life before i could finish. thank you for the entertainment
Comments from author:
Well, I will have to add my own wow, and raise you a woohoo. That's one of the nicest reviews I've ever had. And, right back at you sweets, thank you for reviewing, and frankly for making my day. Sorry, for taking so long to reply.
Review By [getjrjt] • Date [8 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from winnie
Review:
could have used a sequel or two. good story, can't see why there are not more reviews. Thank you for your efforts.
Comments from author:
Perhaps, if I ever get through list of stories I'm currently working through I'll come back to this one. You more than welcome, and thank you for reviewing.
Review By [winnie] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
A little bit darker Buffy than I'm used to, but still mostly the same character. Grief can affect people like that. Totally with you on the 'difference' between Goa'uld and Tok'ra. A snake's a snake. Sweet ending for Buffy and Daniel. I really liked it.
Comments from author:
First and foremost, happy you liked it.

Know from personal experience, how losing a sibling can affect your world view. Think the Scoobies, especially Giles never took Buffy seriously when it came to her personal life. Even when it came to slaying. She was the weapon. They simple replaced the Council in my mind, although they did help her with slaying when it came to apocalyptic issues, but on the nightly stuff not so much.

The only difference between the Goa'uld and Tok'ra on SG to me was that the Tok'ra were sneakier about it. I'd rather deal with the G, at least they're up front who they are. I'm not saying their weren't good among the T, but you get that with any race. Those seemed to be the exception not the rule.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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