Ok, it's high time and beyond for one of your semi annual updates. Please, pretty please. I've read this story at least twice, and I really want to know what happens next. Get on with it! Pretty, pretty please!
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Review By [DeepBlueJoy] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Not Rated
I thought this was a really good chapter. I liked your Tara voice very much and think you did a good job with SG1 too. And thank you for having Jack be a little sensitive. You could have had it play out much differently. I look forward to the other POVs.
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (Willow)" from whirleeq
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just read your comments to another reviewer... the one about you trying to fit your characters in with nolans battverse...and I think you're doing agreat job. You totally have the angst ridden hottie herro, the sympathetic villian and the girlfriend with a secret. Now all you need is to have something explode and put the whole city in danger and you are set
Review By [whirleeq] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (Willow)" from whirleeq
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just read your comments to another reviewer... the one about you trying to fit your characters in with nolans battverse...and I think you're doing agreat job. You totally have the angst ridden hottie herro, the sympathetic villian and the girlfriend with a secret. Now all you need is to have something explode and put the whole city in danger and you are set
Review By [whirleeq] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
The different perspectives approach is a perfectly valid (and in your case, very successful) storytelling device. I'm enjoying this story a lot and can't wait for more!
Review By [ColonelPeroxide] • Date [27 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (Willow)" from RevDorothyL
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I like the different perspectives!
And I'd suspected that you had watched "Legend" a time or two, at least. Nice reference to O'Neill's resemblance to the title character.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (Willow)" from Bobboky
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very very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (Willow)" from Clandestine
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Awesome update :D
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (Willow)" from eriktheviking
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Very well written insights into the different characters. Well done & thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 (Willow)" from lookithaslegs
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Loving this. I'm so happy you're taking the time to set everything up without suddenly rushing into it all. Only problem I'm having is that I want to read it all now. :(
Review By [lookithaslegs] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
DeepBlueJoy
