Review of chapter "authors note" from Cristina
I hope you'll get computer back soon.
Review By [Cristina
] • Date [9 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gylzgurl
Wow. This is an amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it. Then when I got to the end of the last chapter you posted I was severly disappointed that it hadn't been updated in over a year. This really is a good story. I really hope you consider to finish it and continue writing it. It truely is amazing. If you picked it up again I know for sure that I'd continue reading and reviewing. I'm sure others would, too. I'll be waiting to see if you publish another chapter or so. I really hope you do.
Review By [Gylzgurl
] • Date [24 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
I enjoyed this! I'd like to read more, if you write any. Good work for your first attempt at fanfic, and I'm just thrilled that to learn that there's ANY BtVS/Gargoyles crossover fic out there, at all. I'm in serious Goliath/Thailog withdrawal, ever since the show went into reruns, and then stopped showing on my basic cable.
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [6 Mar 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EllandrahSylver
OOOO!! This could get addictive very quickly. One tiny tip, though. His name is spelled "Pthalog" It's a reference to an obscure mythological monster. Which mythos, I don't quite recall, but do remember his name. Just a quick point of interest.
Review By [EllandrahSylver
] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Interesting start. I hope you continue your story. I did notice one misspelling. In Buffy's battle you had Buffy's sword going 'threw' the demon's arm instead of 'through'. But that is minor and I hope to read more about Buffy's relationship with another 'tall, dark, and superhuman' male. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [4 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from vampygal
For a first fic this is very good. Please continue. In the spirit of constructive criticism, the flow of the story seems choppy. Please don't insert AN's during the story, that detracts from the flow of the story also. Watch your grammer. You might want to consider a beta to help with this kind of thing. All in all good job!
Review By [vampygal
] • Date [4 Jan 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]