Excellent story and I love that you used one of the slayers that was called before Buffy was called.
I hope that you get inspired to write a sequel to this story.
::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Lovely work. Excellent characterizations and thrilling action, not to mention a very cool villain. Well done and I would love to see a comix based on your story. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Nicely done. The story moved well, and you came up with a be livable story line. Liked the twist at the end of the epilogue.
Might be interesting to see a sequel a couple of years down the line. Jamie Summers might be a little old, but Wonder Woman should still be going strong.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Very well done story. I loved Jamie's reaction to Steve Trevor's blindness with Diana/Wonder Woman. About the only improvement that bit could possibly have had would be if she wondered if he was Galactically Stupid. Also, I loved how the ending further blended into the Buffy show. Always wondered how Warren managed such a miracle that was April, let alone another one so fast as the Buffy-bot.
Phil
Review By [PhilH] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [war] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from MarcusRowland
Review:
This is great fun, a bit silly but immensely enjoyable. Thanks!
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [7 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from EricThorsen
Review:
Xander would love to know about this. A Wonder Woman, Buffy, Bionic Woman, Stepford Wives crossover? How unique! You blended the four worlds almost seamlessly. The only issue I have with the story is that you jumped straight into the action rather than building up to it by showing the two pairs of agents being sent to Stepford and dealing with the strangeness there. Good overall, but a little difficult to enjoy completely because of that.
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [7 Jan 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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