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Neverwinter Knights

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from garrycooper
Review:
WOW, never expected a story like this. It's good.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SariLane
Review:
I like this. It looks like you've let it go, but I wish you hadn't.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genesis
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this is a good story so far, sad really that it has not been updated in several years. this plot has a potential.
Review By [Genesis] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Arjai
Review:
I have long awaited a crossover with Neverwinter Nights. Now with Hermione, Draco and Dawn it has an added bonus! Thanx! I await the next chapter.
Review By [Arjai] • Date [22 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ThunderGod
Review:
mmmm...okay

okay, overall its an interesting start, and a passable plot

story feels fragmented, a lot of stuff needs more explanation and more filler.
pairings are incomplete, no backstory and makes the story seem rushed and empty. also makes the story sound like you are writing around the pairings and not the reverse

needs editing and a beta
needs a backstory to allow Xander to show how he became what he is.
too over used cliche's..too much acceptance of racist names (muggle etc)

it does have promise, but needs fixing

ThunderGod

but it does have promis if you can fix the problems
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kirallie
Review:
Neat start! Hope there's more soon!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
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hoping for more
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
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Love this. More soon please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from aewnaur
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hey this is a great start... would love for you to continue.. .. i need the gaps filled in lol.. too many questions and too many ways for this to go.. loose ends makes my imagination fire overtime.. lol.. more more more..
Review By [aewnaur] • Date [22 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Very intriguing and unique idea! :-)
Rather strange of Ron to use an unforgiveable, instead some other spells to disable Xander for some time. Will Percy keep the secret, as Ron is family?

Will the wizard types (Hermione, Draco) learn some other magic at the academy? What will Dawn do?

With Xander there, will Aribeth go bad as she went in the game?

Can't await to see where this will go!
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dreamweaver
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Like the first chapter. Hn. "Neverwinter Knights". Interesting name. Wonder where/how Bard came up with that title?
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orion
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Rather Unique, but it looks like it is shaping up nicely. Good work, can't wait to read more.
Review By [Orion] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thewander
Review:
good start, hope for a fast update
Review By [Thewander] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ladeia
Review:
Great start. Can't wait to read more. Are you going to tell us more about Xander's adventures? Hurry back with more soon.
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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