I like this. It looks like you've let it go, but I wish you hadn't.

this is a good story so far, sad really that it has not been updated in several years. this plot has a potential.

I have long awaited a crossover with Neverwinter Nights. Now with Hermione, Draco and Dawn it has an added bonus! Thanx! I await the next chapter.

mmmm...okay

okay, overall its an interesting start, and a passable plot

story feels fragmented, a lot of stuff needs more explanation and more filler.
pairings are incomplete, no backstory and makes the story seem rushed and empty. also makes the story sound like you are writing around the pairings and not the reverse

needs editing and a beta
needs a backstory to allow Xander to show how he became what he is.
too over used cliche's..too much acceptance of racist names (muggle etc)

it does have promise, but needs fixing

ThunderGod

but it does have promis if you can fix the problems

Neat start! Hope there's more soon!!!

hoping for more

Love this. More soon please?

hey this is a great start... would love for you to continue.. .. i need the gaps filled in lol.. too many questions and too many ways for this to go.. loose ends makes my imagination fire overtime.. lol.. more more more..

Very intriguing and unique idea! :-)
Rather strange of Ron to use an unforgiveable, instead some other spells to disable Xander for some time. Will Percy keep the secret, as Ron is family?

Will the wizard types (Hermione, Draco) learn some other magic at the academy? What will Dawn do?

With Xander there, will Aribeth go bad as she went in the game?

Can't await to see where this will go!

Like the first chapter. Hn. "Neverwinter Knights". Interesting name. Wonder where/how Bard came up with that title?

Rather Unique, but it looks like it is shaping up nicely. Good work, can't wait to read more.

good start, hope for a fast update

Great start. Can't wait to read more. Are you going to tell us more about Xander's adventures? Hurry back with more soon.