any fic that has remus in it is love. :D this is a very sweet story, and i love that you even placed xander in it (cause any fic with xander in it is love as well.) i particularly loved this part:
"I must say, I had some severe doubts about Ms. Summers, or should I say Mrs. Lupin's, intellect when she agreed to marry Lupin," the man said silkily from behind Xander, "Until I saw her extreme distaste for Harry Potter."
*giggles* Oh, that was so much fun! Especially the end, with Snape's comment about Dawn and Harry... and overprotective!Xander was very cute. :~) Also, for some reason I can see Xander and Snape becoming - well, not exactly friends, but at least verbal sparring partners.
Review By [Waterfall] • Date [15 Jan 06] • Not Rated
I love this story and I really hope you continue it. Its nice to see a fic where Harry is not automatically worshiped and adored be everyone who's not evil.
Comments from author:
I do plan a few more vignettes on this couple. As for Harry, both he and Dawn can be of high temper at times. Put them together at one of those times and boom, sadly :)
Review By [Lamia] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
