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Review of chapter "Prologue" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
Cool. Weird. Cool. Was it a time loop/ type thing going on with the portal? ( Had a few years gone by, and she just had to fight her way back )

Also, the only character I remember saying "Tiger" was Mary Jane from Spider-Man. I don't think that was her. Please write more!
Comments from author:
I am working on reworking the story line, it was a bit confusing to many

"Tiger" is Tiger Tanaka from one of the James Bond stories.

yes it was a time loopy thing Dawn is a Highlander style Immortal and stays watching from the sidelines during the first 6 seasons of Buffy to avoid any causality issues. (ie Grandfather paradox)
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [21 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Great start. Can't await to read Dawn's story. I wonder how far she was send with the portal.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Elizabeth
Review:
This has potential.

Keep it up.
Review By [Elizabeth] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from CPTSkip
Review:
Great start. More please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from BrendanM
Review:
You may want to expand on the whole Kamiko=Dawn thing at the beginning.

And "Tiger" Tanaka is the M Equivalent of the Japanese equivalent of MI6. He appeared in "You Only Live Twice" along with Little Nelly.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I am trying to decide how to expand on the Kameko=Dawn without giving away too much too soon. I was planning on expanding on that crossover in a flashback but I am not certain.

got to love Little Nelly and her Uncle
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from grd
Review:
my guess is from 'You only live twice' James Bond movie. Tiger was the code name for M's Japanese equivalent.
Comments from author:
And the winner is grd.

That is correct.
Review By [grd] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Orion
Review:
Not quite sure i understood the very first part - what was the crossover in that? The rest though was fairly good. Keep writing, I'll keep reading it.
Comments from author:
I want to keep the crossover quiet for now until someone figures it out.

Just for clarity however "Kameko" is Dawn. It will all make sense eventually.
Review By [Orion] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Not Rated
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