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Review of chapter "Any Landing" from DieselDriver
Review:
All I can say to Magneto in this case is, Yes he has. It wasn't always voluntary but it happened. Maybe they should start their school in Sunnyhell, er, Sunnydale.
Comments from author:
A good idea, but probably won't happen.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from twlight
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Wonderful. I love that Xander was able to get John think about what he had been doing and how he was acting before he hurt anyone.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Now if I can just figure out a way to snowball that change to my satisfaction.
Review By [twlight] • Date [21 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from Vilkath
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Stuck to canon events a little more closely in the sequel but I like this series still. I think one best parts is by going for the Movie versions of the Xmen world at least it's a little more liberal with violence in that people actually allowed to kill humans. A lot of the cartoons and comics do their best to avoid killing humans, especially with Logan using his claws against guns and such instead of people.

I am sort sad how little impact Xander had on the larger scope of things for first half or so the story but it was nice to see his presence make an impact eventually. Mostly thought it seemed like an abbreviated repeat of the movie with Xander perhaps making a few comments to change peoples minds a little bit for side line characters like John.
Comments from author:
With this series I'm trying to keep things realistic so to speak. As in, what would Xander realistically change as he stands now? What changes would those changes make?

Would he change the minds of the adults? No, not unless he does something big. He just graduated high school and arrived on Xavier's doorstep just before the mansion was attacked. If he didn't demonstrate mutant powers he'd be suspected of leading the military guys to the mansion. Even his talk with Magneto didn't do much because Eric has obviously seen more than an 18-19 year old boy.

Who would Xander relate to? John because he'd probably see that had a bit in common with each other. The most he could alter Pyro is to help the kid move past his envy of his friends so he'd stay with Xavier.

How would Xander impact the fight scenes? After two and a half years being support of Buffy he is probably most comfortable in that role. Not to say he wouldn't step up to the plate if no one else was around as seen in Zeppo, but his first instincts would be for others to take the spotlight and for him to help them where he could. The results were him simply helping with the escapes and helping Wolverine with his fight against Death Strike leading to her still being alive when the dam burst.

This was how I thought when I wrote the story and the results were small changes that can become larger changes in War X.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from Morgomir
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Love both the idea and the story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from Ansku
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Good series :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [13 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from kayron
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I liked this story. I would love to see another Xander X story. Perhaps with him using his new abilities in Sunnydale. Maybe some of his X-Men friends (Wolverine or some others) could come to the 'Dale to visit.
Comments from author:
I'm working on it right now, and my general outline for the first half of the story looks just like that. Have Xander use his powers in Sunny D, then invite one of his friends from Weapon X to help him with the Initiative.
Review By [kayron] • Date [12 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from Starfall
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You planning any more Weapon X stories? Particularly any of Xander back in Sunnydale? Would love to read some if you do. =)
Comments from author:
I fully plan on having one more story in this series called War X. My muse has just recently come out of hibernation so I should have the first part out in a month or so.
Review By [Starfall] • Date [4 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from slightlyeccentric
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This is one of my favorite series, I hope that you add another story to it. It would be awesome to see the X-men in Sunnyhell.
Comments from author:
I plan to add another story, but I won't be bringing the X-men to Sunnydale. Like with the other two stories it will revolve around the X-men movie universe, mostly the third movie.
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [9 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from stasa
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Loved the story, short but detailed. Xander's powers are really cool and I hope you have a sequel planed.... :D
Comments from author:
I do, just need to get a few more parts to my other stories out before I begin writing it.
Review By [stasa] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from Bluejello
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*applause* Very nice stories (yes, I forgot to review for the first story >_< ).
Love that last bit about Xander being fine as long as he doesn't have to deal with any other secret government organizations.
Comments from author:
Very happy to hear that you enjoyed both stories and my rather heavy handed attempt at foreshadowing at the end. I hope you enjoy the next story as well, as soon as I can get my muse to wake up that is (pokes muse with pointy stick).
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from Bobboky
Review:
:)
Comments from author:
I'm really not sure how to respond to an emoticon except to say, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from ordieth
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I'm enjoying this series of stories. Your portrayal of this nitty gritty Xander and how he fits in with the X-Men movie-verse is engrossing.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying this. People seem to like this series more than just about anything else I have written.
Review By [ordieth] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from Elleria
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Love this. You will be writing a sequel right? Please?
Comments from author:
Yes I will, don't worry about that.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from APS
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My thought about the fic as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Don't worry I will, or at leas I will try.
Review By [APS] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Didn't we do this already?" from Dragonelf
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:: Feeds the plot bunny ::

I really hope you will get inspired to add a new story to this series.
Comments from author:
Don't worry the next story is all outlined, I just need to write it.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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