Awesome story so far. I can't wait until you update next.

Dani

Very interesting please update soon

I was just re-reading this story because I'm really on a Buffy/X-men kick right now. I really like the story so far and hope you will pick it back up. At the beginning of the last chapter, you said that your muse would keep going until the story's finished...so hopefully it's just been on a vacation?! :)

OK I am slowly become a Wolvernine/Buffy addict so could you please update soon to feed my addiction.

Interesting concept and I like how you haven't spilled the beans yet but one little problem, you have:

You keep writing 'herd' as in herd of cattle when you should be writing 'heard' as in I hear in the past tense. Please fix, little-repeated-typos distract from the tale you're weaving.

LOL, didn't you know that Buffy and the scooby gang secretly raise cattle in their spare time?
Seriously, thank you for the review and for pointing out my error. I'll change it right away.

This keeps getting better. Love that Buffy managed to get Logan away from the added soldiers and back to her house. Nice and unexpected, I kept thinking they'd both end up "guests" of the Initiative. I like the way you put in the flashback/dream for Logan and his desire to keep everyone else out of his problem. I don't see him just deciding to give up going it alone without a struggle. I like that Willow did find a file, albeit empty, on Logan. Interesting that Cordy got a vision regarding the situation. Looking forward to more.

Still really good. I like the interaction between Buffy and Wolverine. One thing - you misspelled Xander - it's an x not a z. Keep up the good writing.

Great start. I like the idea of Logan finding a link between his past and Sunnydale. Wonder how close a tie his project was/is to the Initiative...looking forward to finding out. LOL at how closely Buffy and Logan's thoughts mirrored one another, opposite sides of the same coin, both hoping they weren't going to have to end up rescuing the other one. Dying to see what happens next. Love the pairing, glad you're going to let things evolve there. Buffy and Logan will make a heck of a team.

oh logan yay. please continue.

sounds good so far! keep going!
will buffy become an experiment liek logan (and get the cool claws?)

It's so funny...I was just thinking that I wanted to read a Buffy/Logan story and here's a new one. I LOVE Logan/Buffy stories -- there just aren't enough of them out there. I really like the story so far. Can't wait to see what you do with it. :)

This is a really great start. I can't wait to see where you take it. I liked your characterization of both Buffy & Logan. You have a few typos and grammatical errors but overall this is a great start to a story.

You might want to add Chapter 2 now then, cause you've got my attention. MORE please!!!!!

Oooo - how intresting. I feel your evil chuckles rolling out at the end there. More please!