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Where Are We? And How Do We Get Home?

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Review of chapter "Where Are We? And How Do We Get Home?" from Dapsy
Review:
Hi there,

I loved the story. It was nice, short, and entertaining. I am looking towards reading rest of the series in near future... I bet they will be fun as well. ^_^
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [12 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Are We? And How Do We Get Home?" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
This was pretty cool. I really liked this story-and, I liked how you put the prologue near the end. It made the story more interesting to find out how it began when it was nearly done.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review - and the rating. : - ) I'm happy you liked it.
I debated about the placement of the prologue, but since I wanted to maintain the mystery of why they were there, I put it near the end. So I guess that, technically, it isn't a prologue, but I didn't know what else to call it (maybe Epilogue #1?).

Anyway, thanks again.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [15 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Are We? And How Do We Get Home?" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
I know putting the prologue at the end was a deliberate decision, but personally I thought there was enough mystery there--you could have put it at the beginning and it would have helped make the beginning smoother.
Comments from author:
Hi,

And thanks for taking the time to comment.
I felt that if I put the prologue at the beginning, obviously where it belongs, then it would have pretty much spoiled the mystery of how and why they in the arena in the first place.
Maybe I should have used a different word rather than 'prologue', but at the time I wrote it, it didn't occur to me to use another one.

Anyway, thanks again.

David
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [11 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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