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Review of chapter "Tobias" from jessie
Review:
Very interesting so far. Is there more?
Review By [jessie] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tobias" from Almadynis
Review:
Interesting, but the repetitiveness is irritating, maybe increase the length of your chapters, or shift points of view so that the story continues with no backtracking. Other than that, it is a good start, please keep going!
Comments from author:
Don't worry, the backtracking is only for the beginning. I'll get more chapters up as soon as I can.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [7 Mar 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tobias" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awesome :)

Thanks for continuing the story.

The text is good, but the line breaks are off. Makes it harder to read :/
Comments from author:
What exactly do you mean by "the line breaks are off", and how do you suggest I fix it?
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tobias" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
sounds like fun!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jack" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
I really like this :)

Very cool way to get several teams together and one of the few times and places the Animorphs truly have the upper hand. :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jack" from Kneazles
Review:
This looks like it will be an intresting read, good luck with it.
Review By [Kneazles] • Date [16 Jan 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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