wasnt sure what to make of this when i read the summary, but i found it really intersting. i love the way you told the start from all the points of view, and cant wait to see how you work her back onto the firefly
Connor an "Orange man" at heart? His father "Liam"/Angel must be spinning in his grave, with all his dreams of a Notre Dame education and his affinity for convents . . . and then his boy grows up and has a 'thing' for the Irish Protestant color!
Seriously, though, I'm really enjoying this additional bit of Connor's backstory.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Better In Red" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Wow! Two powerful chapters, there.
The bit about Zoe being a child of Connor's really took me by surprise, as did Connor's bass-ackwards 'reward' from the PTB for redeeming his family's sins (though the latter shouldn't have surprised me, given the Powers' track record).
Nice bit with River guarding Jayne's solitary grief, dressed in red, there at the end.
Hope there's more coming, yet.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Damn I love that title. And I am so liking how this is developing. I try not to read unfinished stories unless I'm REALLY bored but I saw this title weeks ago and it kept calling to me. So I figured a worthy title would have a readable story. Glad I was right :-D
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Wow, I really like this one! It's interesting to see Jayne respecting a woman, though. Now I just wanna make sure that I understand this right, Dawn's going to see Connor? And when she left Jayne the first time she went to Angel? Or am I a bit confused? Anyway, please, please, please update this one again soon!!!!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [11 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Whoa... Awesome, this is very well written, very great, and original story. It is a moral imperative that you continue with this story, an absolute imperative!!! I have never seen a Firefly/BtVS crossover with Dawn with such an original perspective or angle to her, or any other elements in the story; an old Dawn whom is truly grown-up/matured in her long years of living. I LOVE Jayne's behavior to Dawn. 'Miss Dawnie', that had me giggling for some time. Once again, you must continue with this story. Over all you leave me speechless because I have too much to say.
Review By [Aynot] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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