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Review of chapter "The Lives You Leave Behind" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Ooh, awesome. Good challenge response. I'm not sure how the male-oriented prophecy became recentered on Dawn, but I'll blame that on the Key's presence mixing the signal.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions" from VillageOrchid
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oooooh.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Songs and stories" from VillageOrchid
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I've peeked at this story a few times before, but never made it to this chapter before. You got me intruiged. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions" from purrfus
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Not being an author, I admit to having no understanding why it works better for the story to end here and start over - I'm assuming that is the reason for doing that. I am glad you are continuing it because the end of this chapter is just not enough.
Comments from author:
Each part of the series is dedicated to a different part of the life of the story. This part was her life leading up to her decision to go and her leaving. The next part is her journey to Hogwarts. Then I think I'll make it a trilogy by having her defeating Voldemort (is she does) is a third part of the series. Its not really staring over if you think about it.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [13 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions" from (Past Donor)Aomizuoko
Review:
MOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!! This is a sires? Whats the next one going to be calleD?
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review! I've uploaded the next three chps to the series. Yellow Brick road, Waking up and Makes us stronger. Hope you'll stick around for more.
Review By [(Past Donor)Aomizuoko] • Date [28 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions" from athanor
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I really enjoyed this fic, and I'm looking forward to the sequel. I just hope that this doesn't turn into a Draco/Hermione story. I really despise Draco and I find it hard to accept any story where he gets 'redeemed' for any reason.
Review By [athanor] • Date [13 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions" from JennyLal
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This is a really interesting story with a very original premise. I seem to be in a minority of readers on this website in that I hate Snape and really hope JK makes him evil but I'm guessing you're not going to do that .... but I'll keep reading because it's very good. I hope Dawn can hold her own against the manipulations of Dumbledore and when things get bad I'm hoping Buffy comes back to help kick ass!
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [12 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions" from Jorrie
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Ah...good stuff! Good stuff! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next installment. ^^
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [12 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stories of the Other" from Lin
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In response to your response to my review (try saying that a few times fast) Answers in order of question... Yes i thought I'd covered that! It was the potion! It's not going to be til the very end of the series til you find out if someone else did it or it actually was an accident! 2. Soon.. 3. It said it... "Neville will not be punished" I think having the wizarding community hate him, and him hate himself will be enough... 4. I just don't believe book 6 do u???

yes you made it clear that the reader knew what killed him...though i was curious if Harry knew what killed him.
Poor Neville, i hope he doesn't hate himself TOOO much...please don't let him commit suicide or anything.
I beleived parts of book six, the idea of a horcrux is interesting, but pretty much the rest of book six i hated..honestly the whole book felt rushed..and i have read fanfiction that was better than it. Not to critisize fanfic writers at all..but i tend to have a scale ..the book should be "graded" on a higher level than fanfiction..considering its been published and all that you know?
Does that make sense..or am i compeltly messed up?
Comments from author:
yes you made it clear that the reader knew what killed him...though i was curious if Harry knew what killed him.

Ok I've been going through this in my head and I think what you mean is that the reader knows the potion was tampered with, while Harry thinks it was his own mistake that did it, ya? I didn't differentiate... For now its enough for Harry to know the Potion was what killed him. I may or may not clear that up for him later.

If thats not clear enough for you and other readers email me @ nicola.murphy@students.ittralee.ie and I'll try and clear it up in the next chp.

PS I know what you mean about some fanfiction actually rating higher than the book. I think its the same with the new AB Book, though the new book is better than the last one (in AB).

PPS thanks for the rec!
Review By [Lin] • Date [11 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conduit Lane" from Lin
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Oh you have to give us more! This is entertaining and pretty origional as well. Does Harry know what killed him? When will Dawn enter the wizarding world? I hope Neville does not get put in Azkaban. That would be TERRIBLE. I hope Snape didn't do it intentionally, i have always liked him just being an asshole, but nto a "bad" person. Anyway..please write more.
Comments from author:
Answers in order of question... Yes i thought I'd covered that! It was the potion! It's not going to be til the very end of the series til you find out if someone else did it or it actually was an accident! 2. Soon.. 3. It said it... "Neville will not be punished" I think having the wizarding community hate him, and him hate himself will be enough... 4. I just don't believe book 6 do u???
Review By [Lin] • Date [6 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conduit Lane" from Vld
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GO PERCY!!!! It's good that he goes against the Ministry this time. So, when does Dawn enter the Wizarding World?
Review By [Vld] • Date [6 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Even more Dilemmas" from (Past Donor)Aomizuoko
Review:
Hey! Awsome story! But can we see whats happening with Dawn? Please?
Comments from author:
Soon, don't worry!
Review By [(Past Donor)Aomizuoko] • Date [24 Sep 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Inquisitive Minds" from zafaran
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Oh, this is very interesting, and the first story I've come across that's used this variation. Congratulations. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [17 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Inquisitive Minds" from SerenityMalfoy
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this is cool! More Dawn please!
Review By [SerenityMalfoy] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Inquisitive Minds" from (Past Donor)Aomizuoko
Review:
hehe kewl story
Review By [(Past Donor)Aomizuoko] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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