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Review of chapter "Chapter five" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah the start of the epic. The epic what, I donno, but this is an epic. Hehe. Anyways, been wanting to reread this series for a while, and finally I gave in and am doing so. Well, thanks for writing this, and goodbye for now.
Comments from author:
It was an interesting story that turned into a long story. It's nice that people like it enough to reread it on occasion.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Starfox
Review:
Nice Story - and a good premise for more. I am curious to see who those extradimensional slayers are.
Comments from author:
It's part of a series. One that I still need to go back and finish completely but there are a couple of stories after Willow's Cousin.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from DieselDriver
Review:
This was VERY COOL!!!
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok the green sparks coming off of Dawns hands was seriously funny too.

It occurred to me that Clark is more than human and has a soul too. Yikes. Is he strong enough to withstand the magic of the amulet and not be destroyed like Spike?
Comments from author:
Yep.

He is Clark... :)
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from DieselDriver
Review:
Reading this chapter made me think I had been taken over by the spirit of a hyena ala Xander only mine was a laughing hyena. OMG that was so funny in so many places.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, one of your best, and longest, series. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
It's also probably my favorite in a lot of ways.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Gideon
Review:
Traveling dimensions collecting Slayers? Could be dangerous - will certainly be fun :)
Comments from author:
It was an interesting ride.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from deathgeonous
Review:
Very interesting. I like. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Rune
Review:
Now Recommended by Rune.
Review By [Rune] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Rune
Review:
The "Balance" in Buffy seems way off-balance. One girl to fight how many vampires? The powers seem to be more of players than anything else. Meddlers messing with mortals just because they can. So bringing in Clark and friends seems to balance out things so much better. Thanks for the story.

I'd like to see Clark spar with Illyria sometime. Also it would be nice if Illyria/Fred had a love interest, what about Wesley? I know she is an Old One but we humans should not be underestimated. The Illyria/Fred mix you have made is just full of possibilities for character growth, angst, adventure and more. Illyria could set herself up as a goddess somewhere and guide the development of a world.

I do not have enough recommendations, I doubt I well ever have as many as I want. If I like a series I recommend the first story in that series. When I get another rec I would like to spend it on the series you have so please put the stories in some sort of order. "Willow's Cousin" seems to be the first in the series, correct me if I'm wrong.

ps whole story review, mistakenly put with chapter one at first.
Comments from author:
It is the first story in that series. I really need to fix that whole series thing.
Review By [Rune] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from LalaithQuetzalli
Review:
Interesting fic
I liked it
I would like to see how Smallville would change with someone actually helping Clark, especially if that someone is Chloe, and a Slayer.
Have you considered the possibility of writing that? Oh, and maybe make it a Chlark too!!!
If not maybe I might be...
What do you think about that?
Oh also, what happened with Lex? I mean, he was the one who got Clark and Chloe to Sunnydale. Did he get out? Did he suspect of anything going on? How did Chloe and Clark explained not being there when it all went to hell (literally)?
So many questions...
I wanna know!
Comments from author:
This was back in a time when Lex was still sane, he had a meeting and then left. What Lex knows at this point is questionable. As for Clark and Chloe getting together, they do, mostly sort of :), Parts of my other fic mentions them again.

As for writing a story about just them later, I might I haven't really looked at it in a while, mostly because I missed a lot of lot of the later parts of smallville and I'm sort of more or less lost other than the vaguest of outlines.

I'm sure that Clark would do a lot better if he had someone to push him. :)
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Bunney
Review:
great story i'm off to read the rest!

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story. I hope you enjoy the other stories I've written.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from Wise
Review:
This story would be 10x better if you mixed in a couple of commas and periods here and there. Runon sentences are nobody's friend, nor are contractions or possessive forms of words without apostrophes. For example:

Lex’s thoughts ‘That girl close to Clark’s cousin looks hot and might be some fun on this boring council trip glad that Clark could come and lighten the mood I hate this company maybe I can sell it off to someone else, they aren’t making enough money anyways.’

A grammatically correct version of the above is as follows (and as the story is told in present tense, I am maintaining that for this correction): Lex thinks, 'That brunette is hot; I might have some fun on this boring council trip after all. At least Clark came along to lighten the mood. I hate this company. Maybe I can sell it off. They aren't making enough money, anyways.'

It still sounds a bit odd, however, switching subject like that in the middle of the paragraph.
Comments from author:
I see what part you mean. I'm not exactly sure what happened there. Thank you for pointing a specific example. I'll fix it. I'm thinking that I missed a return key or something. Thanks again for reading.

Edit: I edited that chapter a bit. I'm also putting editing the whole thing on my to do list this summer. If it would help I'll probably go back through and change things to past tense.
Review By [Wise] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cathaighn
Review:
I really like the concept! It's very original, and just needs to be polished grammar-wise and stay in the same tense throughout the story. Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Yeah, that was my first writing project in a few years. There are bound to be some issues with it. I'm glad that the story was interesting.
Review By [Cathaighn] • Date [27 Apr 06] • Not Rated
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