I beg of thee if you have even one ounce of compassion and mercy you in your heart; you will grace others and I with a new chapter in this wonderfully written grand tale of the woeful life of our favorite Slayer(Chosen) and of her compatriots of the Looking Glass(The Alternate Universe People).

...in other words PLEASE write more! Please?!?

Probably not what you had in mind, but I just posted updated versions of the first 3 chapters that flesh things out a little (very little) bit.

I just stumbled on this one. It's very intriguing and I'm really enjoying the exploration of this new world. Any chance you'll be revisiting this?

(or updating the Ms. Kite story and relations anytime soon?)

Yes. I even plan to finish it eventually. Unfortunately, every time I look at it I'm tempted to revise parts of it (I originally started writing it 5 years ago and I've gotten to be a better (I hope) writer since then.). Which slows the process down.

Thanks for the comment.

I just stumbled on this one. It's very intriguing and I'm really enjoying the exploration of this new world. Any chance you'll be revisiting this?

(or updating the Ms. Kite story and relations anytime soon?)

Very interesting and good. Shame it's inactive. Thanks for writing this though, bye for now.

definately needs to be updated

I'm really enjoying this. I hope you keep it going. Sooner rather than later ;D

I won't make any promises but I really hope to finish this story THIS year ;-). But before I get to it, I have 3 other stories to finish and 2 others to move forward. To say nothing of anything new I might start.

Thanks for the comments.

This has got to be the best story I have come accross in a long while and it's definitely one of the best all together. I absolutely love it and am completely devistated that there's not more written of it. I want to read more. You just can't leave the story hanging like that. That's just wrong. I personally am waiting for Willow to make the connection about Lorn calling Buffy the Chosen and the slayers previously being called the chosen. She needs to do some confronting. Please update soon. I can hardly wait

I hate cliffhangers. I just wanted to get that out in the open first thing.

I really like how you put this story together, you don't waste time with long drawn out explanations of how Buffy got there or where she got the money to live until she got a job. You gave a logically concise explanation and then moved onto the meat of the story.

I like how you are were (before you so viciously abandoned the tale) showing the differences in "real" world Willow and the AU Willow. How you have Buffy pretty much clueless about her own emotions because of her pain. The differences in Dawn are very logical for her to have considering she's the slayer.

I love the plot. You've set up so many things that you could almost go in any direction with it.

Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

I haven't abandoned this story. Really :-). I'm just having writers block/plotting issues with some of the scenes in the next 5 chapters/section. It was supposed to be almost all action but that's not how it's turning out so far.

Sorry about the cliffhanger. I try to avoid those also. I promise it won't happen again. Maybe. :-).

I hope to get back to it soon. Thanks for the encouragement.

Very good. I hope you update; I look forward to seeing how this turns out.

Cool :)

Heisenberg? Nice. I wonder if Willow will recognize the principle.

Communication, cool. I wonder what will happen next. Oooh, maybe the thunderclap was Dawn I dying and sending her keyness to this Dawn. Or not :)

I hope you will find inspiration to continue this story.

Okay, just found this and read it and I really like it, but it's been so long since you updated. Any chance of a new chapter or 3 any time soon? I wanna see if I'm right about who the sorcerer is. I also wanna see more interaction between Buffy and Beth.

Well... I'm working on something else right now but as soon as I finish it this story is next. I really want to get this finished.

Sorry, somehow I did not review this before. This chapter is another very nicely written one. It also has some more mystery, a bit of sexual tension, and the beginnings of the action (fight type). Yes! :-) ...but of course I am eagerly awaiting the un-veiling of some (or all) of Buffy's secrets. Oh, and of course some romancing between Buffy and Willow. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! PLEASE!?!

Sorry this review is so late, but I wanted to reread your entire story. Excellent update to one of my favorite stories. I like your Buffy and your alternate-Willow is just neat. I also like your alternate-Dawn. She is an odd combination of innocent teen Dawn and Slayer, but I like her a lot. I still have no idea of what is going on, but I think Richard Wilkins is in on whatever it is somehow. I'm glad you are updating this story again and look forward to the next update with a great deal of anticipation.

Thanks for the comments. It's really a simple story. Really :-).

Just your basic 'girl from a different dimension meets girl with a destiny' with a side order of 'girl helps girl during the annual apocalypse season' - ending with a small dose of 'will she stay or go home' angst. But with dark wizards and vampires. :-).

Every apocalypse story needs a villain. The hard part is getting everyone in the same room for the apocalypse. I just wish I could have found a way to include Faith in this story. That would have added a nice tough of Buffy angst.

Need more .... please!?! I really like this story a lot. I shall endeavor to be patient ... sigh.