This story, while great, NEEDS to be updated. Is this far enough into 2011 for you? And if you don't plan on updating, could you please send a memo out? I'm really enjoying rereading this story!! It's really good, so PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
Review By [myunlifesucks] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
The update was greatly appreciated, especially the emotional/personal advancements. This chapter also adds to the plethora of previous questions. Duhh! I'm hoping you answer at least one question mid 2011 or at least get Buffy and Willow to mutually acknowledge their attraction to each other.
Review By [wizathogwarts] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Glad to see you haven't given up on this fic. I wonder what it'll take to get Willow to take this whole thing seriously....
Comments from author:
I really hope to finish this some day.
Willow? Some time before Chapter 18 she'll realize how much she's screwed things up by not taking Buffy's warnings seriously. And hopefully it won't take me another 4 years to finish writing up to/thru that part.
:-)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Apocalypse Blues" from Aynot
Review:
I beg of thee if you have even one ounce of compassion and mercy you in your heart; you will grace others and I with a new chapter in this wonderfully written grand tale of the woeful life of our favorite Slayer(Chosen) and of her compatriots of the Looking Glass(The Alternate Universe People).
...in other words PLEASE write more! Please?!?
Comments from author:
Probably not what you had in mind, but I just posted updated versions of the first 3 chapters that flesh things out a little (very little) bit.
Review By [Aynot] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Apocalypse Blues" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
I just stumbled on this one. It's very intriguing and I'm really enjoying the exploration of this new world. Any chance you'll be revisiting this?
(or updating the Ms. Kite story and relations anytime soon?)
Comments from author:
Yes. I even plan to finish it eventually. Unfortunately, every time I look at it I'm tempted to revise parts of it (I originally started writing it 5 years ago and I've gotten to be a better (I hope) writer since then.). Which slows the process down.
Thanks for the comment.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Apocalypse Blues" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
I just stumbled on this one. It's very intriguing and I'm really enjoying the exploration of this new world. Any chance you'll be revisiting this?
(or updating the Ms. Kite story and relations anytime soon?)
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Apocalypse Blues" from deathgeonous
Review:
Very interesting and good. Shame it's inactive. Thanks for writing this though, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Apocalypse Blues" from Hecatonchires
Review:
definately needs to be updated
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [17 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I don't think we're in Kansas anymore." from GypsyDruid
Review:
I'm really enjoying this. I hope you keep it going. Sooner rather than later ;D
Comments from author:
I won't make any promises but I really hope to finish this story THIS year ;-). But before I get to it, I have 3 other stories to finish and 2 others to move forward. To say nothing of anything new I might start.
Thanks for the comments.
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Apocalypse Blues" from Gylzgurl
Review:
This has got to be the best story I have come accross in a long while and it's definitely one of the best all together. I absolutely love it and am completely devistated that there's not more written of it. I want to read more. You just can't leave the story hanging like that. That's just wrong. I personally am waiting for Willow to make the connection about Lorn calling Buffy the Chosen and the slayers previously being called the chosen. She needs to do some confronting. Please update soon. I can hardly wait
Review By [Gylzgurl] • Date [4 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Apocalypse Blues" from exiled
Review:
I hate cliffhangers. I just wanted to get that out in the open first thing.
I really like how you put this story together, you don't waste time with long drawn out explanations of how Buffy got there or where she got the money to live until she got a job. You gave a logically concise explanation and then moved onto the meat of the story.
I like how you are were (before you so viciously abandoned the tale) showing the differences in "real" world Willow and the AU Willow. How you have Buffy pretty much clueless about her own emotions because of her pain. The differences in Dawn are very logical for her to have considering she's the slayer.
I love the plot. You've set up so many things that you could almost go in any direction with it.
Thank you for sharing your time and talent.
Comments from author:
I haven't abandoned this story. Really :-). I'm just having writers block/plotting issues with some of the scenes in the next 5 chapters/section. It was supposed to be almost all action but that's not how it's turning out so far.
Sorry about the cliffhanger. I try to avoid those also. I promise it won't happen again. Maybe. :-).
I hope to get back to it soon. Thanks for the encouragement.