Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SilentAddiction
Wait, that's it? I really like it so far, but why does it end there?
Review By [SilentAddiction
] • Date [22 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from malchance
More, please. Please don't leave this abandoned. (I love when Xander puts people in their place.)
Review By [malchance
] • Date [26 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from andromedao
Review By [andromedao
] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from spring
I love this wonderful story, I must ask though why haven't you finished this story yet?
Comments from author:
Unfortunately RL took over. I haven't written anything in almost two years. which makes me sad, and I do hope that my muse comes back and I can finish all my stories.
Review By [spring
] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from neovente
would you write more of this story ? I REALLY like it....
Review By [neovente
] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Faeri
Ch.2 was bloody awesome! I cant wait for the next part to come out!! Keep 'em coming! You rock!
Please update soon!!!! ^_^
Review By [Faeri
] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Caliadragon
Please write more of this?! I love this fic and would really like to see what is going to happen next. I also love the blooming friendship between Xander and Joxer.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately the last year has been crazy, so I haven't had the chance to finish writing this, but I do intend to start writing again as soon as I'm finished moving! I have the whole thing planned out I just need to write the chapters. Thank you for the review! I love your stories as well!
Review By [Caliadragon
] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from FlitShadowflame
I love this fic! It looks like it's been a year and some since you updated, but I'd be pleased as a punch to see some more...even if it's made me want more of a Xander/Joxer or Ares/Xander than a Spander. Hell, Ares/Xander/Joxer :)
I hope you write more!
Review By [FlitShadowflame
] • Date [21 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Kirallie
Nice to see Xander telling Herc off like that. More please?
Review By [Kirallie
] • Date [8 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ReflectionsOfReality
I definitely like where this story is going. Hercules certainly needs a wake up call...
Are you going to deal with the issues of the Twilight in this story? And what happens to a mortal with marks from various gods when the gods themselves are for the most part forgotten? I was just thinking that if you follow the idea that the soul is not constrained to time (that a soul can carry the marks on it to both its past and into its future) then a mortal once marked would have always been marked and always be marked it could explain the way Xander attracts the attention of otherworldly element and if he is protected by certain gods then it could explain why certain magics go 'wonky' around him... especially if he is marked by both the house of Love and House of war simultaneously... and if he actually got Bacchus' blessing (god of demons and supposed creator of the bachi or ancient vampires as well as wine and mind altering substances)...
It would be even more interesting if you introduced some of the other pantheons... I wonder how much of the history Xander's presence alters... Have you thought of the possibility of discarding the temporal prime directive(no changing the past as it could wipe out your existence altogether or changing it for the worst) or on the other hand if you have the gods give Xander the key to reversing the Twilight once the various movements/factions bent on their destruction have long since passed on to antiquity... if the gods were woken up in modern times well bye bye powers that be and the senior partners would be pissed if Bacchus came back into being or someone was given his mantel of power (there was a story by D'nalia I think that gave Spike that mantel but what if it was Xander's? another possibility for him being a demon magnet... ooh I like this one, it would explain why his parents were the town drunks as well god of alcohol and part of the mantel would be accepting it on some level so it would not really be there until he was at least told about it, I mean totally fitting the new god of drunken debauchery and demons is born to a couple of drunks living almost literally on the mouth of Hell)...
You know maybe Xander can help Joxer with his balance maybe get him to ditch the amour and helmet as I am pretty sure that is half his problem right there, the other parts could be that Joxer might not be able to learn to fight the same ways as most people and if Xander were able to teach him some of the martial arts that are directed more towards peace (some of the eastern disciplines) than war then he could possibly achieve some progress... that is unless you take the other approach and give the reason of his incompetence as old injuries (read parental abuse) incorrectly healed in which case Xander could probably be considered the most advanced healer in that time period (after all the bumps scrapes, cuts and broken bones the Scoobies had to face Xander could probably qualify as a paramedic in first aide, after all he may not be considered the watcher the slayer the witch or a fighter but he could have learned how to stitch them all back together as the normal guy, even if that is not the case even basic first aid could be considered advanced especially if you can mix in a few pop cultural references)
Oh look at the plot bunnies go, oh what fun I wonder if I can get a chance to watch their mating habits...
Feel free to contact me if you want any more or feel free to ignore what I have written, I do hope you can continue soon but I would be a hypocrite if I were to try to demand an update,
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality
] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from darkwwwish
really liking this story will you be writing more?
Comments from author:
Yes, just as soon as I can get things in RL calmed down, everything has just been Extremely hectic since September, and sadly both my writing and my art had to be put on hold. Hopefully I can start taking time to Write again with in the next few weeks!
Thank you so much for the review
Review By [darkwwwish
] • Date [5 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from MerKat
Cool story! I like it! Sooooooo . . . when's Spike going to pop up? and did he kill Willow? (wouldn't really mind much)
Review By [MerKat
] • Date [19 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from purrfus
So the idea is Xander sees Herc as Buffy in large leather pants? I can see the resemblance. I really enjoyed reading this and would like to read more. I have set up tracking in case you return to it at some point in time.
Comments from author:
I do plan on continuing these, but my current muse is all major angst, so I'm waiting until I'm in a lighter mood to write more, hopefully it will be soon!
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [1 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from JayCee
I only give this an 7 due to the fact that there isn't more. Now if there was more I would maybe give it a 8 and only the highest rating if it was finished as so far I do love this. I always love reading Xander putting egotistical people in there place. Can hardly wait till you write/post more. Hopefully it is soon. JC
Review By [JayCee
] • Date [2 Jul 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from sunnyfan
I loved the story so far and hope you're gonna continue with the story.
Review By [sunnyfan
] • Date [2 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]