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Review of chapter "Old Age" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
good story I love how in one line you explain Xander's Allergy to magic.

And thanks for the Rec
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [18 May 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery" from lorwen
Review:
cool story.
I wish there was more.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [29 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery" from spring
Review:
Please finish this fic.You have e hooked and now I want more.
Review By [spring] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery" from AnimeRonin
Review:
Any more of this?
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [31 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery" from Bobboky
Review:
interesting
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discovery" from MrPowell
Review:
so do you plan on posting a new chapter soon?
Review By [MrPowell] • Date [16 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery" from FairyQilan
Review:
...Xander's going to be right pissed, yes?
Review By [FairyQilan] • Date [13 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery" from Elleria
Review:
More soon please.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3, Wands and revelations." from Lin
Review:
So Dumbledore memories are going to be transferred to Xander???? 'cause..obviously Xander can't remember things that ...never happend ..unless this is a differnt universe and his memories are fake? Hmm...well this is most defiantly going to be intersting...i always did see Dumbledore as a manipulative guy. I hope you continue with this.
Review By [Lin] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3, Wands and revelations." from mdemanatee
Review:
Please update soon! This story is really good. I'll be checking back.
Review By [mdemanatee] • Date [20 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3, Wands and revelations." from ctvwarren
Review:
Great...please continue......I am glad you chose xander for the role...
Review By [ctvwarren] • Date [6 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3, Wands and revelations." from Dieselsaliva
Review:
This is a very interesting start. I hope to see more of it. =]

~B~
Review By [Dieselsaliva] • Date [13 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3, Wands and revelations." from Elleria
Review:
To short! More soon please? This is very interesting so far. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [13 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3, Wands and revelations." from TorturedAngel
Review:
ack, no,no,no you must not leave it there ack! lol really interesting read so far. more soon, please. :)
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [5 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3, Wands and revelations." from RedDeathLV
Review:
BeatriceOtter made most of the points I wanted to make regarding grammar, punctuation, and proper word use, but I did have one remaining question.

Why did you split the first chapter into three painfully short, chopped-down sections?
"Chapter" two in particular is almost offensively short. A paragraph is NOT a chapter, no matter how dramatic you think it is.

Needs much condensing.
Comments from author:
I must give an apology for the short "chapters". Iget insperation in sceenes and tend to put them up as soon as i have them done. I will try to condense them into bigger chapters from now on.
Review By [RedDeathLV] • Date [3 Feb 06] • Rating [4 out of 10]
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