Review of chapter "Willow, A Jedi called Qui-Gon and Hogwarts(Edited)" from EricThorsen
I guess this is a good story, but its moving a little too fast for me. You might need to look at what you are trying to do with it and then write it based on that.
Review By [EricThorsen
] • Date [31 Jan 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]