Review of chapter "Saving Miss Smith" from Ponder
This was... strange. The lack of quote marks and speech attribution made it really hard to follow. :(
Comments from author:
I had to go back and reread the story. I can see your problem.
I think when I wrote it, I was thinking that with each new paragraph a different person was talking. And I suppose I thought that would be clear enough. At least after the first three chapters I started using quotes.
I probably should go back and add the quotation marks and repost the first three chapters.
Other than that, I am curious how you felt about the story as a whole.
Thanks for you comments.
Review By [Ponder
] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Rating [2 out of 10]