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Review of chapter "Saving Miss Smith" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
This was... strange. The lack of quote marks and speech attribution made it really hard to follow. :(

*** Ponder
Comments from author:
I had to go back and reread the story. I can see your problem.

I think when I wrote it, I was thinking that with each new paragraph a different person was talking. And I suppose I thought that would be clear enough. At least after the first three chapters I started using quotes.

I probably should go back and add the quotation marks and repost the first three chapters.

Other than that, I am curious how you felt about the story as a whole.

Thanks for you comments.

David
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Rating [2 out of 10]
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