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Review of chapter "Time" from hekatenovember
Review:
I like it so far. Please continue writing it. I am especially curious about Ginny and what you are planning for her. And please let Buffy and Angel have a major wig when Dawn and Connor date. And yes it is spelled Connor not Conner ....
Why oh Why do they always make that mistake every single fiction writer ...
Other then that keep on going and oh if possible bring the host in I mean he is like the best character ever
Comments from author:
Ah, thanks for the spelling correction. I think it's because that's the more common way to spell his name.

And suggestion noted.
Review By [hekatenovember] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time" from neverwill
Review:
I hope it really is Tara helping Ginny and not the First with some scheme. It's too bad Xander won't be part of the group to show that Muggles can have a place with Wizarding society and not need immediate obliviating. It's also too bad Giles won't be basing the main Watcher's Council offices at the new Academy (Buffy could probably use a lot of advice and he could just have a "public" office in London for non-magical types before they're cleared). Hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
To your first comment, there's a possibility for either. Who knows, I'm just thinking up most of this as I'm going along, so keep your mind open to all the possibilities. To your second comment, he'll still play an important part in the main plot, though probably not until I'm at least a third into the story. And to the third, he actually might do that, but he's got to do some thinking. Don't worry, he'll come back into the story, but I don't want watchers-in-training to complicate the story just yet.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Eaters and Death Cheaters" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Nice story so far. I look forward to seeing what will happen next. However, I do think you need to clear up the timelines a bit. I mean that when Harry turned seventeen, and Albus was already dead, I didn't get that for a bit because you jumped straight from Dumbles being alive and calling the Slayer contingent to Harry turning seventeen and Albus being dead for a month already. So basically, what you need to do is clear up the dates in the prologue and chapter one. Yeah. I ramble. I know. Never can seem to get across what I mean in a concise way. Sorry. Anyhow, hope you update soon.

CT.
Comments from author:
It's a good idea, I think. I might fix it this weekend if I have the time. Although I have MAJOR writer's block right now, and am only halfway through the next chapter and can't seem to get much further. But again, I'll see if I can do it this weekend.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Eaters and Death Cheaters" from Lin
Review:
The story need some work, it almost feels like you are summarising a story instead of telling one. It is worth fleshing out though.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I think my first three chapters are kinda summary-ish as well, but I think introductory chapters are my weakest point. oh well. But when I'm done a lot of my story, then I will definately come and fix these chapters up. Most of the things I've done in the huge gap of time from ch.3 to ch.4 was work on my writing skills. I think they are about up to par now.
Review By [Lin] • Date [14 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many Meetings" from Dreamweaver
Review:
Oh, dear. I wonder what'll happen when they show up at Hogwarts' doorstep.

I don't know exactly what your Dumbledore had planned, but if he likes conspiracies, secrets and hidden plans as much as the one in the books did, I have sincere doubts that he had told/mentioned it to anyone. If he did mention it in passing to any of the staff it probably wasn't in any great detail. Dumbledore seemed to be the sort to apply to the philosphy of "throw them in the deep end and see if they sink or swim". He would have been the sort to hold off telling anyone until just about the very last moment possible and then watched the chaos that ensued.

Meaning, I don't think that any of the teachers there know what he was up to. If I'm at all on the right path, sparks are likely to really fly once the Scoobies make an appearance at Hogwarts.
Comments from author:
I think the DD in my story likes conspiracies, secrets and hidden plans just as much (or even more) than Rowling's did. He's a manipulative old wizard, and he'll be throwing wrenches into the mix, (just remember that wrenches can sometimes be helpful) even from the dead. (which, if you read ch. 4, he actually knew was gonna happen about a month before it actually did)

And to your last paragraph: Hell yeah!
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [8 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many Meetings" from VillageOrchid
Review:
These three chapters are all a little sketchy, but the gist of the story is interesting and worth expanding. Thank you for sharing.
Comments from author:
It was my pleasure. (no, really, it was!)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Many Meetings" from orangemike
Review:
I know you're deliberately mystifying and confusing us, but I think you're overdoing it.

(And 'venerable'? I do not think it means what you think it means; you want to say 'vulnerable' there.)
Comments from author:
I changed it. Thanks.
Review By [orangemike] • Date [12 Apr 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Many Meetings" from frogstompinfun
Review:
more more more please please please
Comments from author:
Well that's very rude.

(You know it's reviews like these that put me off from writing my latest chapters)
Review By [frogstompinfun] • Date [1 Feb 06] • Not Rated
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