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The Grand Master

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Review of chapter "The Grand Master" from trouble
Review:
Ok,y'all can't an excellent start just hanging like that,it's cruel to poor,unsuspecting readers.brain was merrily cruising along thinking "wow what a neat mix of characters." then boom end of fic; way mean.

anyway Happy Writing
trouble
Review By [trouble] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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