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Review of chapter "Saturday II" from djhardim
Hope to see more of this story.

As far as bad guys - Warren, and Andrew's brother(can't remember his name).

As advanced as their cloning technology is, could they help the Asgard with their problems?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Had a lot of fun reading this and hope yuo continue it someday.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from possom
Review By [possom] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Great story, I like the concept. A bit of wish fulfillment but isn't that what some of these stories are after all?

Good handling of the powers. You still need to finish dealing with NID after cleaning up the current mess.

Please continue this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from trongod
And once again I return to the Epic that is your tale of Daring Do!

Excellent story, although lamentably unfinished, unadded to, and just sorely mistreated by its Creator... And your Muses, of course...

Wondering about Crysta, Sam's assistant; from what the description was, she sounds like a Potential that joined the Air Force once she didn't get Called. Makes me wonder if the starship's various scanners couldn't pick up on whatever additional "stuff" that makes Buffy the Slayer and use that as a baseline to ID the other Slayer and all the Potentials that are out there. They could then monitor, and those in dire straits like Faith could be contacted and either assisted or removed entirely from their situation. Training them as well as educating them for both normal - whatever that is - life and the Things-That-Go-Bump-In-The-Night life would improve not only the Potentials life but would allow more support for the different starships and the support crews thereof.

And hasn't anyone read any of The Destroyer series? I'd think that Sinanju would be an overwhelming advantage that Xander would have gone for, if not Buffy and Cordelia for the martial arts it would grant them... Or is Remo Williams and Chiun going to show up after NID whines to the President about the "abused" agents Xander is sending and will be sending back?

Which, come to think of it, might be funny to read about...
Review By [trongod] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thursday" from BlueEyedJedi
Happy New Year and god bless.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday" from Downery
Okay this time no more ranting. Enjoying your story but the security they place on the MAU is pretty weak. If Xander and Dawn are anime fans they should know about pocket dimensions and such especially if they are Tenchi fans. So why aren't they keeping the MAU in a pocket dimension so no one can access it but them. Heck even Mousse's hidden weapons technique would be better then nothing.
Review By [Downery] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friday" from Downery
Cool story till Xander started talking about sharing the secret. He just made himself into a saiyan... a being that can destroy planets and he thinks sharing the knowledge of the device is a good thing.

If it was just the inner circle it would be cool but once Buffy finds out she'll tell Angel. Never liked Angel on Buffy, started liking him in AtS since they changed him from a pedophile to a person that actually liked adult women but then during the flashback episodes i hated him again since it showed he used to kill infants and if he killed infants and loved mental torture... well i'm sure he was raping lil girls and boys in front of there parents too. Angel/Buffy and Angel any human just makes me a little sick to my stomach knowing the mouth the girl is kissing killed infants and the dick she's sucking was used to rape little kids. I mean would a woman use a vibrator that was used to torture kids just because the batteries were changed?
Review By [Downery] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from DarthPayne
Been a while since we've seen any updates for this one...
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from DarthPayne
I do hope we'll get to see more chapters at some point.

This fic has *so* much potential. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thursday" from theunixer
I hope you will be continuing this fic.
Review By [theunixer] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from Razial
This is a great story and I would love to see you continue and eventually complete it, is there any chance of that happening? it was a wonderful crossover and one of the best stargate crosses I have seen. It has a wonder star trek theme added in as well, Date's inclusion was nicely handled. I would like to see what happens when the NID pushes xander as I am sure they will do in time, I would also like to see the conclusion to the relationship triangle between xander,willow and dawn. Then of course is the war against the snakes, plus how the asgard decide to act with the new power house. Anyway again great work and please continue (razial)
Review By [Razial] • Date [25 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from myrddyn
ok i love where your going with this so far. one thing i would like to know is the mau off better technology than the ancients? what i mean to say is that are the aliens that built the device technologically superior to the ancients? ( i know it might be a stupid question to ask but i just wanted a definitive answer!) if so could it be used to creat zpms drones and even alteran city ships?
could you imagine xanders fleet with the lagrange point satellites from atlantis season 1
looking out over earth with an a.i as well as the already formidable weaponary they have defending earth? maybe use a replica of atlantis as the start of colonising mars at the same time as making the planet habitable! hell they could even make an alpha site that is deployed from a capsule with considerable defences for the sgc! i do hope that you update this very soon!
Comments from author:
I am a firm believer in "The only stupid question is the one that goes unasked." Here is your definitive answer:

The MAU was invented by the Fwirthi. They are described by Elrod W., the author who created the MAU, to be one of the most un-imaginitive races in the cosmos. How they managed to create the MAU in the first place, is beyond the ken of most sapient species. The Routine is a VERY good thing. Change is Glacial. Advancement comes usually due to accident, very rarely by design. Yes, they are a space faring species, but they acquired that technology from others. The Scientists of the Fwirthi species would be considered technitians for any other species, and mere end users (or worse) for the most creative species out there. Science for the Fwirthi is an iterative process. Step 1: Is Item A broke? If No, leave it alone and move on to Item B & repeat Step 1. If Yes, Move on to Step 2: Completely disassemble Item A to locate the defect, replace defective part with non-defective part, & reassemble. Test. Go Back to Step 1.

Given that, I highly doubt that they would be more technologically advanced than the Alterans, unless they thought to purchase the advanced technology from other sources. The MAU is a technological fluke, an accident for the Fwirthi. The Fwirthi could not have come up with it deliberately. I doubt very much that any species could, not even the ascended Alterans, although, as I am fond of saying, "Anything is possible."

In spite of that, the MAU would in fact have the ability to create ZPMs, Drones, City Ships, and all their other technology, if you have the thought, and can form the request to the MAU. The MAU is not limited by its own technology, only by the limits of its users imagination.

The MAU is by far the most powerful device I have ever heard of in any fictional source. The Master PC program is a close second, comparatively speaking. A Green Lantern Power Ring is a far distant third.
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [6 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from Darkstrider
Awesome. Love it so far and hope you continue!
Review By [Darkstrider] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saturday II" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
lol..i liked how X handled the NID and nice field test of all those toys *g*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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