Review of chapter "Chapter One" from firedrakegirl
This is awesome!!!!!
Review By [firedrakegirl
] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
I hope you will be inspired to continue this story.
Comments from author:
I do intend to, but got exhausted creatively and am actually about to have my first baby some time in the next few weeks. I don't know when I'll continue the story, but I do actually have it mapped out in my head. I just need to find the time and energy to actually write it out. I am glad you like what I wrote so far!
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [26 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RosytheCat
You know, when I first read what characters you were going to be using I raised an eyebrow and thought "Okaaaaaaaaaay...". Now, at the end of the chapter, I don't know whether to start applauding for keeping our heroes mostly in-character, or bust a gut laughing as I try to imagine the craziness those two could get to if given sufficient time and imputus. Excellent job, though Erik should have tried to punjab Faith or something at some point. Also, keep in mind that, as hot as Gerik is, the character is, in fact, a virgin--one completely dedicated to the idea that sex comes with true love, and with true love comes marriage. Also, you're going to need to make sure to give Erik sufficient time and opportunity to heal from Christine...Wait, is this during the play/book or after?
...Silly me, it has to be during because the Populaire isn't all burned up. In which case, you're going to have to deal with Christine, as she'd be living at the Opera, and Erik isn't going to abandon his star pupil for anything at this point.
This looks to be a difficult project for you, but you seem to be making an excelent start.
-- Rosy the Cat
Review By [RosytheCat
] • Date [6 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]