Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from DancingQueen
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I just want you to know that I LOVE this story...and you by extension. I am looking forward to more. It amazes me that you have made a movie that I hate, The Phantom Menace, into something enjoyable. I look forward to more.
Review By [DancingQueen] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from rfresa
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Very fun story. I mostly want to see Vader get Luke and Leia back, so please keep writing!
Review By [rfresa] • Date [15 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from bradsan
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I read it again from he beginning till the end and it still made me laugh. I'm glad you updated it because it gave me The opportunity to read it again.
I love your story but the part that scared me the most isn't even written yet. You know which part it is? It's the part where I think Willow will do the spell and Buffy will be pulled back. I so hope that you will write it differently and not leave her there and bring her back in the end. But when I read and see how happy see is. after Revan telling about the First that part keeps scaring me.
But until then I enjoy every update you write.
can't wait what will come next. Oh and Buffy's face when she finds out who daddy is. Oh the color of her lightsaber could be green: balance and protection
I tried to read this, but couldn't get past chapter 1. Your emasculation of vader pretty much sealed the deal that i won't read any further. Best of luck to you.
Comments from author:
Well if you consider Vader being kicked in his family jewels and then falcon kicked by a Slayer so he meets a wall and surviving with nothing permanently damaged and with enough wits to recognize that "hey look at this girl she is not a spy and what not...how can I use her...I'll inform my master" ...emasculation, then its really best you don't continue to read this.
Best of luck with finding a story more to you liking.
And Happy 2013!
Review By [SimulatedSoul] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from CPTSkip
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Just finished rereading your whole story. What can I say? I love it. I love the real emotions shown by everyone and the laughter that you invoke in me and how your characters have grown. Thank you and please keep updating.
Comments from author:
Aww I am speechless...I am blushing seriously...thank you for you review.
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from Blackett
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Wow. I just found this and I am loving it. I usually don't go for Star Wars stories (which is weird since I consider Star Wars the best movie series ever and that I love the books...kudos for using characters from there by the whey) but I find your story quite good and often funny so I can't wait to read more of it.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your very encouraging review! And I love SW books!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from Raider
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very well done.
not sure if you were going for comedy at times..but several spots of this chapter amused me.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Well story classifications are: Crossover, Action, Comedy, Romance, Crossover Universe. So some parts are supposed to be amusing.
Glad they amused you trough.
Review By [Raider] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from hellbells
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yay! glad to see this being continued. Hope to see more soon :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yes hopefully it be more soon.
Review By [hellbells] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from AndreaMaine
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I love what you did with this story. With Anikin getting repaired/ healed I wonder with him and Buffy getting wed how long it will be before they have a half-sister or brother for Luke and Leia?
Comments from author:
No comment.... :XD
Thank you for your review!
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from HebiR
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I am pleased this continues. What a great start to the new year!
The droid tilted his head. “I accompanied Ladies Buffy and Sache to the party held by some of the acquaintance of Lady Sache and … well later I saw them unconscious. And then some one powered me down, My Lord. I also believe that there was attempt of a memory wipe, but it was unsuccessful.”
As you can see it I do not understand what is being read as. I had that problem myself before it was system fault. I hope you can fix to make it better. Thanks.
Comments from author:
I think I fixed it. Thanks for pointing it out!
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from chrysanthemum
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Wonderful story! Most of the characters are way OOC, but it's still a very fun read. I especially like your take on Anakin's medical condition and Palpatine's manipulation.
I would be happy to beta a few chapters, if you will write them, although I won't be able to after mid-December. Any updates before then would be much appreciated. Thanks for writing a great story!
Comments from author:
Thank you! Yes I think I did Palpatine the most OOC character there. My opinion anyway.
As for beta-I would PM you, but that feature is not available on your profile.
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from lilacsandroses
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Hello, I just reread this story again and still loving it. Question, will Vader/Anakin learn the truth about his twin children? Will Leia learn the truth about her real father and twin brother Luke? I always thought what they did to the twins was cruel, splitting them up when they should've been with their family, Anakin mother's husband family. I would love to see this particular closure. I'm a firm believer that all siblings should stay together no matter what the circumstances are. Thank you!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I am glad to hear this, it makes me type the chapter(s) faster. (now instead of sloth spread we go in tortoise speed) Answers to questions: No, he'll know about Luke in two chapters. Not for a while. With Leia there are some difficulties. Mostly her adoptive parents, she does not even know she is adopted yet.
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from deathgeonous
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Was going over some old favorites to add to my recs list and I thought of this one. So I reread it and now am adding it. This is still dang good and I hope for more someday. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Ad it will be, after all I only need to type it, send it to beta reader and post it. XD
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated