Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tamda
Hmm a few less its and it's... (yes a few of those its should be it's) with a 100 words, it's closer to poetry than a traditional story.
Nice core, but with some polish this could be a really intriguing idea.
Especially since Krum was attracted to her *for* her brains in canon. ;0)
Review By [Tamda
] • Date [2 Dec 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]