Review of chapter "Questions Better Left Unasked" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I liked that this story kept me guessing, trying to figure out who everybody was. I fear I don't know enough of the "X-Men" mythology to be able to place that last bit, in the 38th century, but I enjoyed it anyway.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Questions Better Left Unasked" from KaylaShay
Review:
This left me feeling very confused. It jumped around so much and tossed out so many names so quick that it lost me.
I liked the story idea that I dug out from behind the jumble, but I would like to see it presented in clearer manner...
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Part of the idea of the story was the jumbled confusion. I like how I presented it. It took me three years to actually write it down. Ok, I know, pathetic. But I still like how I did the story.
Review By [KaylaShay] • Date [9 Feb 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Questions Better Left Unasked" from Valkyrie
Review:
Okay. That's just confusing. Well, the bits about the future, anyway.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know it's confusing. That's the point of the story.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [9 Feb 06] • Not Rated
KaylaShay