Review of chapter "Beginnings of a plan" from Christy
absolutely pitiful...you might be dead on with the people of the Buffyverse, but you certainly didn't pay very good attention to the Merry Gentry series. Where do I start? for one, if you were mentioning the color of their skin in Merry's office in the same order as their names (less confusing that way), you got Rhys and Galen mixed up. And no matter how long Rhys may have lived among the humans, he still talks...well, courtly. They all do. And it's not Frost who can't stand flying- it's Doyle. And Kitto doesn't have a freakin' tail- Merry mentions many times playing with his butt with no mention of a tail...all he has to show he's half goblin is his eyes, mouth, and scales. And he NEVER comes out from under his blanket in the corner on plane rides.
My suggestion? Go back and reread the stories again...possibly try a beta the next time.
Review By [Christy
] • Date [1 Jan 07] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beginnings of a plan" from spk
Very cool! I love Buffy/Merry Gentry crossovers...there are just not enough of them out there. "Queen Buffy"...what a riot! Can't wait to see what happens when they get to the Court. :)
Review By [spk
] • Date [10 Feb 06] • Not Rated