Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
So Abby is now Tims' Watcher. Cool. :-)
Review By [Netchka
] • Date [17 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Christy
well, that's very interesting, but I can definitely see Abs being a Watcher- her and her tats means she can hide in plain sight.
Review By [Christy
] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Short but neat. Nice job on the characterizations also. Will there be more? I hope so.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [14 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jupitersdaughter
that was great! i would never expect him to be the immortal, which made it all the more better. i laughed so hard i woke people up. wonderful!
Comments from author:
The story was just as fun, and as unexpected, to write.
Review By [jupitersdaughter
] • Date [12 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]