Not bad story over all the 'ending' isn't the best in the world but not to bad all things considered. For an abandoned incomplete story it ended all right. I do kind of wish more happened 'on screen' as it were, basically the only real action of this entire story was all the emotional drama of Xander's breakdown and recovery.
Comments from author:
It's not abandoned, just stuck at the moment.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Nice story. Will Xander end up putting on a mask at night?
Perhaps the Bat Clan should learn about what bumps in the night sooner, rather than later. I presume Batman has already found ways to disguise his scent.
No Xander will not be donning a mask though he may help out from time to time in a research capacity. He's still a Scooby after all so he'll rpobably handle the more supernatural stuff.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
I have just reread this story again and I really hope you get inspired to continue adding new chapters to it.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# Every time you pick up a grain of sand you hold a universe in the palm of your hand. - Dr. Lao, "7 Faces of Dr. Lao" #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Not Rated
I read the first chapters of this story a while ago, then I lost it. I just reread it from the beginning, and it's just as intense and emotionally wrenching the second time. The interaction between Nightwing and Xander is wonderfully drawn. Great stuff.
This is probably one of my favorite fics out of the one's you've written. More down to earth and human with the characterization and such. I really hope you update soon!
I love this story. Go DC. And I like how you have the characters interact with one another. It seems real, if you catch my drift. You've portrayed the characters very well.
Please update soon though. :D
Jellylegs.
Review By [Jellylegs] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Not Rated
