I came across this by accident, and was happily surprised! I like the wasy the friendship between Xan & Dick formed slowly. Not happy about Willow, though. I have to wonder what kind of demons took her down and what did they do to Xander? Will they come back? Love the portrayal of Giles. Also, ghost-Willow said she thought channeling so much power through Xander may have changed him - if he didn't die. So what changed, if anything? You stated in a December 2009 in a reply to a review that this has not been abandoned; but it has been almost 5 years since the last update. Which in my experience, pretty much means the story does not get completed. It did stop at a good spot, though. Keep up the good work and I hope this kick starts the muse!
Review By [Silver] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Wonderful story! I absolutely love Xander-centered xovers and I am a huge fan of the Batclan. This was a terrific. I know its been awhile but I would love to see this story updated. It really is a great piece of work.
I just read this for the first time. This is really good! I hope some inspiration hits. This story is too good not to continue! Good luck with your writing!
Not bad story over all the 'ending' isn't the best in the world but not to bad all things considered. For an abandoned incomplete story it ended all right. I do kind of wish more happened 'on screen' as it were, basically the only real action of this entire story was all the emotional drama of Xander's breakdown and recovery.
Comments from author:
It's not abandoned, just stuck at the moment.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Nice story. Will Xander end up putting on a mask at night?
Perhaps the Bat Clan should learn about what bumps in the night sooner, rather than later. I presume Batman has already found ways to disguise his scent.
No Xander will not be donning a mask though he may help out from time to time in a research capacity. He's still a Scooby after all so he'll rpobably handle the more supernatural stuff.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
I have just reread this story again and I really hope you get inspired to continue adding new chapters to it.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Not Rated
I read the first chapters of this story a while ago, then I lost it. I just reread it from the beginning, and it's just as intense and emotionally wrenching the second time. The interaction between Nightwing and Xander is wonderfully drawn. Great stuff.
