now we no way she didn't want to come back from haven and why Danny-boy went to face Anubis cause he saw it as a chance to get back to earth if the others kicked him out. you've just got to finish this true love must win the day there's no way that they wouldn't find one another again. now go and write you lazy girl(?)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [Skyefather] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
It's a little short, and Oma's spelled with only one M. I think you should expand on this. How'd they meet? Universe's a big place, even for ascended beings.
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Actually I am working on a prequel. Thanks for the spelling tip. I should eventually be posting it.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [15 Oct 06] • Not Rated
OMG!! You definitely have to turn this into a full story! I have never felt so much emotion from a one-shot before. That was a brilliant idea! I love the pairing. You have an amazing talent for making the reader experience the emotions with the characters. Please continue... :)
Review By [spk] • Date [26 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is a really good start, I love the Daniel/Buffy pairing and I think the way you set up this first chapter the plot of the story has a lot of potential....so please keep going and update soon!
Review By [allygator] • Date [17 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
You really have something going here. I think that it is a great beginning to a story. I hope you do decide to continue it. I want to see Buffy and Daniel meet. Please continue!!!
Review By [katgurl] • Date [17 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I enjoyed this. I love Buffy/Daniel fics - you may want to move this to that category - and was actually thinking about the idea today and then poof! There's your fic.
I like that she's going after him, so very Buffy, when she's torn away and that Daniel's horrified when he realizes what's happening to her and that you use it as the catalyst for his futile confrontation with Anubis.
I love that even with the amnesia she's engraved on his brain, like Sha're, the image is good.
I do hope you continue and have them meet and love again amongst the slicing and dicing, hopefully with a happier ending. ;p
I think this is beautiful, I love Buffy and Daniel together, I really feel that you could continue this, and have them meet up again, especially since she should still have her memories from he time in heaven and Daniel could gain some from his experience with Oma in season 8, you could add in a part where tells Daniel about her, or he remember when Replicarter is in his head, I don't know but those are some ideas, they both ended up back on earth so they should get together . . .
Review By [BkwrmDancer] • Date [16 Feb 06] • Not Rated