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The Gift of a Family

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Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from DieselDriver
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Just finished this part of the saga. There is only really one word that can describe it.

EXCELLENT!!!

Places had me almost crying in sympathy, laughing out loud in others. I love it and only that it needed to be said kept me from going directly to the next story. I need some way to mark you as one of my favorite authors.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Head Bozo In Charge" from DieselDriver
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Actually yes, I have heard of Millie Doumant. It's been several decades since I saw the movie.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thoroughly_Modern_Millie
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from bradsan
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I read this story several times and I saw I didn't review before. So I'm telling you this story is so good.

Love Teal'c Innocence: O’Neill, I am curious. How would your daughter grow horns. every time I read it I have to laugh. I can see him asking.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from bradsan
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I read this story several times and I saw I didn't review before. So I'm telling you this story is so good.

Love Teal'c Innocence how would your daughter grew horns. every time I read it I have to laugh. I can see him asking.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from divaslayer
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Awesome story, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from BrownFinderth
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Not sure if I've already reviewed this delightful tale (28 pages-wow!). I absolutely enjoyed reading it and most definitely want to read the next part of the story!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from MysteryladyTx
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That was fantastic! I loved it LOL...I loved the way Jack answered the door..LOL...Major Hottie! LOL

THANKS:"D
Review By [MysteryladyTx] • Date [4 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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Chapter 28 Colorado Springs.

poor General Hammond. I really feel sorry for him.

Chapter 29 The End of the Beginning.

ohha I hope Davis has an escape plan *g* and Jack as well cause B will give him Hell *g*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from serenityselena
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great story ...
Teal`c`s last line is fabulous ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from serenityselena
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wonderful story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from Dragonelf
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You did a good job with this story.

::Starts reading the next story in the series::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from TheatricalBarrister
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I really enjoyed reading this. It was a "light read" for me, and showed Buffy in a very positive manner. There were plenty of humorous moments, too.

The thing that bothered me, though, was about Buffy not knowing Jack was her dad. I know that she had never seen him (her dad), and didn't even know Jack's full name until talking to Giles and Willow on the speakerphone, but how could she not know the name of her father, whom she had sent a letter? I'm pretty sure that she didn't just write a letter addressed to "Buffy's Dad", but actually addressed it to him, or else he wouldn't have gotten it.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I understand the thing that bothered you. I did stretch out believability there. What I had decided was that Buffy wrote the letter when she was under a great deal of stress with her mother in the hospital and Glory after Dawn. As well as that she had already been burned by Hank, so she didn't want to get her hopes up too high. Then her mother died, and she died and was brought back to life followed by all the joys of season 6. She never received a response from him in all that time so once again she was feeling burned and tried to block out all thoughts of her real father, including his name. Pretty thin I know but it made for a great reveal to her when she was kissing Daniel. That scene was originally what made me want to write this in the first place so I was a little determined about doing it that way.

I am glad you enjoyed it otherwise. : )
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from Genuka
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Youse an evil evil evil!!! Author!!! I loved this story and I'm definitely watching the rest of the series!!!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from Ansku
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Good chapter :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Beginning." from RevDorothyL
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Nice 'last word' from Teal'c, there!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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