You need to work on your formatting it is nearly impossible to read.
Comments from author:
Please forgive. My browser flaked out, wouldn't let me edit, posted the nasty raw icky screwed up html text, and then wouldn't let me get back in to fix it until this morning. It was....(digs fingers into cheeks and pulls down to show eye sockets)....BAAAAAAAAAD.
Review By [wraiths] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loose Dead Ends" from ElaineRhodes
Review:
Fun story. Thanks for including the note about the crossover show - I've never heard of it, much less seen it, but I could still enjoy this story.
I did notice one typo, though: "She really just wanted to chick in and go to bed." I'm pretty sure that should be "check in"
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Not Rated