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Review of chapter "Prologue" from banner
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This is such an interesting concept. I'd love to read more.
Review By [banner] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from spring
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Okay you caught my interest now are you going to finish this?
Review By [spring] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from dugleikoo
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I like it, nice start.
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from exqurere
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Oooh great start, can't wait for more!
Review By [exqurere] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from manic
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quote: But she couldn’t – she had to save the life of a teenage clone’s not-quite-human girlfriend.

LOL! I like that Jon called Janet. At least at the Air Force Hospital, Janet might be able to get away with warning people that it's classified.
Review By [manic] • Date [15 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from purrfus
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Amazing teaser! So many questions yet to be answered! Who is with Dawn in the Springs and who isn't and why? How / where did Dawn and mini-Jack meet? Please answer all of these questions soon.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [4 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bobboky
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looking forward to more
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Vixen
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Awesome......But it hasn't been updated! I Want More Story PLEASE!!!
Review By [Vixen] • Date [28 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from aussiemel
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love it keep up the great work
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [22 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Gaeriel
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You've certainly caught my attention with this beginning. Fascinating premise. I can't wait to see what you're going to do with it!
Review By [Gaeriel] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from LadyBold
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Janet groaned again, wishing she could pull the covers over her head and forget the phone call had ever happened. But she couldn’t – she had to save the life of a teenage clone’s not-quite-human girlfriend.

That was a wonderful line, I can't wait to read more! Intriguing beginning!

Bernita
Review By [LadyBold] • Date [22 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from thesithspawn
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Now that's what I call a great beginning! I can't wait to read more:)
So Update soon!
Review By [thesithspawn] • Date [21 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from TarnishedGold
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Interesting start, I'll be watching for this one (besides that clone is so darn cute). Keep up the good work & update soon.
Gold
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [20 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Vld
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If the NID were smart, they wouldn't try anything against Dawn... wait, they might not be smart, but even they can't be so stupid that they'd risk the wrath of the Council! Because I certainly don't think even the President could stop the Slayerettes if they got angry enough.
Review By [Vld] • Date [20 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from tals
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Nice start, I'm looking forward to see how this will turn out. As for the reviewer who felt that you had painted yourself into a corner by leaving Buffy and Willow out of it, I respectfully disagree: Jon is the one making the phone call, he probably wouldn't know the truth about Willow and Buffy. He'd see them as concerned friends and family, and have no reason to think that they might be able to do something to help. (And, yes, Willow may be strong, but that's no garanty that she can help Dawn).

So, well... that's what I wanted to say. Have fun writing.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [20 Feb 06] • Not Rated
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