Review of chapter "The One Who Sees and The One." from
BobbokyReview:
nice
Comments from author:
Again thank-you.
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [15 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Who Sees and The One." from
jupitersdaughterReview:
disclaimer, every story has one, so put one in yours
interesting concept, but it's a bit confusing on the slayer front. things need to be explained a little more. u wrote it well though and it has potential if u can fix it up a bit
Comments from author:
confusing how? explaine what? fix it? let me know what u mean and i'll let u know. thnax for the FB. Have added disclaimar thanx for pointing that out.
Review By [
jupitersdaughter] • Date [21 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The One Who Sees and The One." from
angrymonkeyReview:
That was one weird story, but still good. I don`t think I`ve ever heard that interpretation of the game.
Comments from author:
Thanx I like weird, as for the interpretation: I think in canon it says after the Game ends the victor can either dame or save the earth bringing about Hell on Earth or a golden age. I just built on that, including the typical Scooby Armageddon.
Review By [
angrymonkey] • Date [21 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
