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TwoBlackDragonsReview:
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There Once Was A Demon By Shehulk
http://www.papa-bear.com/Wuffara/Fanfic/ThereOnceWasADemon.htmlThere Once Was A Demon Who Fell By Shehulk
http://www.papa-bear.com/Wuffara/Fanfic/ThereOnceWasADemonWhoFell.htmlThere Once Was A Demon Who Loved By Shehulk
http://www.papa-bear.com/Wuffara/Fanfic/ThereOnceWasADemonWhoLoved.htmlThree other Shehulk stories can be found here.
http://www.papa-bear.com/Wuffara/Chosen
Chosen Too
Chosen 3
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TwoBlackDragons] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DragonelfReview:
Nice little story.
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Humankind cannot stand very much reality.
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Comments from author:
Thanks.
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Dragonelf] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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zigpalReview:
great story. I like that Buffy finally found true love and maybe between both witches they can keep her satisfied. lol
Comments from author:
Thanks. You may like to read the sequel Guardians of the Veil for more on the threesome.
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
zigpal] • Date [15 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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shadowMDReview:
Absolutly Love your work! Keep it up.
Comments from author:
Thanks I will.
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shadowMD] • Date [3 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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kribbyReview:
Your punctuation leaves much to be desired. You use ! countless times when you are to use a ? This mistakes leads the reader to think the characters are overly excited when they are actually confused. This is a strange problem.
Comments from author:
Your comments have been noted.
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kribby] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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JoeDineenReview:
Interesting but very confusing until I read the stories it was based on.
Comments from author:
Thanks, you can find the story it is based on at
http://papa-bear.com/Wuffara/ I will be posting the sequel in a few days
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JoeDineen] • Date [22 Feb 06] • Not Rated