This was a great story! I completely love it. The way you wrote everyone's voice was spot on. Man, really would love more which only goes to show how wonderful the story is to begin with. Yep, this was awesome! Thanks

Nice. Very interesting too. This story has HUGE potential! Are you going to write a sequel to it?

sequl sequl please

Just reread this for like the fourth time -- still love it!!! What an awesome world you created. Your Xander is possibly my favorite ever. Thank you for the gift of this story. Awesome!

I enjoyed this. A follow up in Sunnydale would be very cool.

Great story,
keep up the good work.

Good story :)

you should write a sequel. and maybe seperate the chapters?

Nice story but it would be even better with the whole reveal to the scoobies.

sweet, if he is fully vamp will Buffy detect him? what about when he is fully Immortal?

Great story!

Love this.

Awsome story you really should do a sequel.

Oh my GAWD! I loved this. Though I would have loved to see some slashyness .... It is a truly wonderful story. I loved it totally and am hoping for more. Like his adventures in Sunnydale especially like he takes on the initative, Glory, dark Willow (though not kill her) and the first.... and that the memories of magic he absorbed get used. Man would I love to see Buffy be put in her place as she has always seemed to push xander to the side. Even Willow seemed to have lost the friendship once Buffy started to push Xander out. I have always loved Xander and love to see him the hero of the story. Thank you for a good story. Take care. Jimmy

Great story, i hope there is a sequel