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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
Review:
Nice job with this tale. You wove a great tale with Willow as a immortal. Now, how about the sequel?
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
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With Kendra out of commission, Willow and Jenny captured, Snyder is going to have a BLAST expelling Buffy from school!
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
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Well, it looks like Angelus is slowly being locked out of houses. And, do I see the start of a special relationship between Buffy and Willow? Might be interesting to see.
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
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If what Methos told Joyce, then Buffy is no longer, or never was The Slayer! If that is the case, then could it be that Buffy is also immortal?
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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So Jenny's watcher is Joyce and Buffy is the Slayer. Talk about weird situations! Now, its time to figure out where Jenny is and how to rescue her. Might mean calling in Cassandra or Duncan for assistance.
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
So, Jenny has been captured by Angelus and his gang. Not good. But something tells me that while Spike may want to drain Jenny, he may help her to get back at Angelus.
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Something tells me that with Angelus on the loose, Willow and Jenny are going to need all the help that they can get. And that help in the form of Buffy is going to be needed!
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
A couple of points. They should be saying mom not mum. They're Americans not English.

Several of your other stories you have Willow saying so "mute" it be rather than "mote" it be.

In this story you have people being impelled rather than impaled. Those are misspelling not English spellings.

BTW I like your stories!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and sorry I did not comment before but I could not have received an email prompt (I try and comment on reviews as I receive them) This appears to have happen a few times and so I thought I would check.

I have commented on mum/mom many time on this site as well as others. the mute/mote I have not caught but will go through the stories and change it (That is the problem with having non wiccan betas and spell checks will miss it) same with impelled/impaled.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [27 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DevJannz
Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I was sorry to see Jenny die but it worked well. I hope we get to see a continuation of this sometime in the future.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Sorry it has taken me so long to reply, I have had several problems in recent months (both medical and technical).

The sequel will hopefully be posted but I only have the prologue and half of chapter one written, other stories are taking precedence at the moment. But we will have to see!

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from shadowMD
Review:
Loved it
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [shadowMD] • Date [3 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from MistofRainbows
Review:
I liked the story up till the party with the witch immortals. And all of the virgin stuff. Why that would have any reasonably connection to magic not being tainted in the buffy world of evil is, for me hard to believe. But that's just my view point.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I am not sure exactly what you are trying to say? If you are talking about Wicca? It is very much connected to male-female in nature i.e. sex. As for the fact that Willow will always be a virgin, that was just an extention in that although male magick and female magick are very much connected it implys that Willow would not be able to use both male and female magick but only pure female magick (This is not meant to imply male magick is tainted just different).
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [15 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from JoeDineen
Review:
This story I am enjoying. I think the pacing is right and characterisation good, though Joyce should have come clean. Some one has to make the forst move there.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Yes someone has to make the first move but how many times do we humans do the right thing?
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [11 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NoLifeKing
Review:
I like it and look forward for the pairing. :-)
With Willow immortal and Buffy a Slayer living rather dangerous, I wonder how long this will go.
How did Angelus know about Jenny being immortal, before she had drawn her sword? ;-)
Comments from author:
We will have to see how long?
Your question is answered in part two.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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