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Review of chapter ""To Whom It May Concern –"" from inqonehundredandone
Review:
A good story with a decent plot. I was going to suggest a list of the cameos but I guess someone else did that as there it was in chapter 30.

You don't have to throw every crossover you can into the story. It works, more or less, here, although it did seem rather strained at times. You also get people like me whining that their favorites (Harry Dresden and the Doctor) didn't get a big enough part.

Good work, looking forward to more.

p.s. I'm not actually a Harry Potter fan, so the fact that I read the whole story is a big plus.

Tom
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

I wasn't intentionally throwing in all of the crosses, they just seemed to show up at various times as I tried to show just how widespread and diverse the new Council's operations have become. ;-)
Review By [inqonehundredandone] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14 - Preparations" from buffyrazz
Review:
plays soothing music 4 ur muse, massage therapist ready, nice fruit n cheese platter, assortment of drinks chilled..

of course if ur muse is more faith than echo

nightclub, kickass tunes, buncha friends to dance with n open bar

waits patiently

oh love the story n looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

My muse has been less than cooperative lately, so i don't know when the next chapter will appear. I know what I want to do next and where the story is going, but getting it written down is proving to be a lot more difficult than I'd hoped.
Review By [buffyrazz] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""To Whom It May Concern –"" from twlight
Review:
This is such a wonderful story. I do hope that you are able to update again soon.
Comments from author:
Trying to work on the next chapter, but my muse isn't cooperating. ;-(
Review By [twlight] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""To Whom It May Concern –"" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
*poke, poke* is it still alive?

Please, more!

FlyingSnake
Comments from author:
Yep, it's still alive.

Only my muse is currently ignoring it completely. ;-(
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Any chance of an update. This poor fic has been langishing for a while. I am thinking it has been abandoned into the cold harsh world. That is just not of the good.
Comments from author:
Definitely not abandoned.

Unfortunately, I'm kind of stuck at the moment with a bit of writer's block as far as this particular story is concerned since my muse isn't being all that cooperative. ;-(
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""To Whom It May Concern –"" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
Oh ho HO!

Looks like pretending the attack came from a different dimension severely backfired on Dumblydore, seeing now that his attacks were on the 'Royal Zar'khandash family'. Ohhh, too good.

Nice confrontation- serves that bastard!

So happy that things are groovy with Remus & Sirius- they really only care about Harry so I'm glad that Buffy didn't kill first and ask questions later.

Very happy to see him arrested.

Nice little cliffie- will he fight back or wont he? I assume probably not, everything is allll about appearances dhaaarling, but I'm sure it won't be easy.

I wait with bated breath- but I know you're busy. Whenever you do get a chance though, I will be supremely happy :D
Comments from author:
Yep, Dumbledore's extreme cleverness in trying to conceal Harry's kidnapping has turned around and bitten him in the butt. ;-)

As far as Remus and Sirius (and most of the other members of the Order) are concerned, the Scoobies are taking the information DD gave them and their intentions into account as they decide what they are going to do to them.

And while I know what's going to happen ultimately, my muse isn't being all that cooperative when it comes to getting the next chapter written. ;-(

Thanks for reviewing, Luna. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude - Guide for Character Identification" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
ah- many thanks for this. You really weren't kidding when you said this would have multiple crossings, huh? :)

Major kicass scene in the Great Hall btw. Bloody brilliant.
Comments from author:
You're welcome.

And yes, the Scoobies are PISSED!

Since they want to make sure that all of the mouth-breathing idiots in the Wizarding World (which seems to be most of its inhabitants) realize this in as unmistakable a manner as possible, they tried to make an unforgettable entrance. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28 – “Expect the best, plan for the worst" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
Excellent moment with the 5 kids v. the monsters

Way to have Lennie Briscoe (and Sabrina from the previous chapter)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm trying to show how each of the characters could have developed in a different way than JKR showed us, without suddenly warping them into unbelievable caricatures.

And Lennie has always been one of my favorite L&O characters. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24 – “Actions Speak Louder –“" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
Giles, Xander, and Riley give the *best* advice! haha.
Comments from author:
Yes, they do seem to have trained Harry in the best ways to deal with annoying people, don't they? ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21 - 'What Dreams may Come –'" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
*very* nice way for the to figure out that Harry wasn't dead... And how wonderful to see all of the dearly departed!
Comments from author:
The PTB would be extremely wise to NOT make any of the departed Scoobies mad, because pissing off Joyce and Cordy - just name two of the ladies - would be a MAJOR mistake. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20 – “…You May Get It!”" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
Now THIS was an excellent chapter. I especially enjoyed your comments on HP”

-“That doesn’t seem to do much of anything except promote stereotyping”
-hot-headed red-head

-liked how you compared the power of the wizards to Willow- that really helps the reader in comparing advantages.

But… Hermione in Ravenclaw????
….. HARRY IN RAVENCLAW

*grumbles* oh, okay. I am taking my canon cap off and burning it in order to continue reading this story
:)

Also.. So Willow Osbourne? She married Oz? But Faith is there too? I definitely missed something…

And Major BAMF moments at the end:
-Harry’s declarations- SO true
-“Whatever else Snape might have thought was left unsaid, as Remus casually shoved Sirius away from the table and then turned and, without a single word, punched Snape in the mouth, instantly knocking him unconscious.” YES!!!!!!!!! SCORE!!!!
Comments from author:
I wanted to make sure that it was very clear that the average wizard and witch in the Wizarding World are much more powerful on an individual basis, than Willow, since wizards and witches seem to be much more common than the Scooby-verse. More will be revealed regarding each universe's magic-users' advantages and disadvantages in future chapters.

And Harry felt it only right to let the members of Order of the Fried Turkey get an idea of what their eventual fate is going to be, even if they don't believe him.

And yes, I envied Remus punching out Snape, myself. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17 – Actions Have Consequences" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
"the razor-sharp edge of his smile letting all know that Ripper was most definitely present and was going to hang around and play for a while." ---oooh yes. I do like having Ripper around, he can be ever so fun :)

Go Team Scoobies!
Comments from author:
Ripper was one person who showed up only infrequently, but who definitely left a lasting impression on the situation after he was gone. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 – “…often go awry.”" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
A smidgen of tears at the very end- heck *I know Harry is alive but I was still so sad anyways for them!

Darth Maul outfits - you evil genius you.
Comments from author:
Thanks again.

The Darth Maul outfits were a nod to the Jedi idea, since I figured that a lot of the kids in the school would probably be enjoying the stories the same way kids do in this world. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15 - “The Best Laid Plans of Mice and Men…”" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
Wow, I love how much thought you've given to the post-Chosen world. I especially liked the bit about Karnak demon clan. Obviously I've been thinking about my ideas about what post-Chosen would look like since I'm writing a story about the Slayer Academy but you are on another level of awesomeness my friend.

*whew* I'm worried about how things are gonna go down... With Buff & Xan in another dimension... Things are not looking good!
Comments from author:
This whole world seemed to evolve almost on its own since various character would just seem to show up on their own as I was writing. ;-)

And as I noted, the Karnak clan is the brain child of Shawn Dorca (norgco1@yahoo.com) and can be found inn his story "CPA." ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 – Hunters and Hunted" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
Oh! I'm so excited that I got one of your crossover references- I've always loved my Mulder/Scully time :)

Tsk tsk... Me thinks Dumbledore is not behaving appropriately... and I can't wait for him to try to screw with the Scoobies.

And Lupin- thank you for making him the one smart one... He's always been one of my favorites :)

And yay for Harry's mad show of magic powers!

PS: Do you have a list anywhere of your various characters and what worlds they go to? Jon Carter- Isn't that ER? And I get the Supernatural brothers & X-Files... Sadly, I don't think I got any of the others :(
Comments from author:
I've been trying to make all of the crossover characters fit into this world as seamlessly as I can, and Mulder and Scully seem to be a perfect fit as far as I'm concerned. ;-)

Remus has been paying very close attention to all of the Order's members' behavior over the past few years, and he's been patiently waiting for the betrayer to make a mistake and reveal themselves, so that he can extract vengeance for James and Lily on them.

And Harry's power level will be examined more closely in upcoming chapters.

There's a list of all the crossover characters and where they originated in one of the later chapters.

*This* Jon Carter is not the same character as the one from 'ER,' nor is he the character from Edgar Rice Burroughs' series of novels. His true identity will be revealed very shortly. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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